Full Moon Waltz

Watch with me, see with me, dance with me, love with me

 

 

Full Moon Waltz

 

A simple spot of tree lined dreams

on painted skies which now retreat

unfolding evenings majesty (a’ balanced view along the ridge)

 

~for lonely hearts a foot path makes in vision’d quest and sonnet breaks~

 

Beneath these branches born of leaves

and cedar scents to fill the mind

to cast a glance of eastward flow (await of this which we do seek)

 

~a watch face offers in its shine, a different look yet equal time~

 

How bright this crown does now appear

above the rim of distant earth

igniting lover’s wakened hopes (beyond the shadowed silhouettes)

 

~anticipation breathes new life, awash in this sweet glow tonight~

 

For on this breeze, illumined love

of lighted bloomed chrysanthemum

enchanted kisses destined flow  (on moonbeam highways formed to trace)  

 

~so listen close on feelings meant and hear these words of love now sent~

 

As on this night a light does find

that two hearts dance the evening’s show

reaching for that full moon waltz (before our eyes, yet oh so far)

 

~as I now whisper this to you, forever will my heart be true~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Be still my heart, enchanting Jack, I can't say more, stellar read. Sigh.....

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Frieda. When I get a Frieda "sigh" and am happy.

[Sami Khalil]

"For on this breeze, illumined love
of lighted bloomed chrysanthemum
enchanted kisses destined flow (on moonbeam highways formed to trace)

~so listen close on feelings meant and hear these words of love now sent~"
Your words waltz with love and reflects it all to the full moon...Well done...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sami. Your kind words are always appreciated.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

more often we need to really listen to the feelings of love...another jack special....you do love poems better than anyone can...the imagery blows me away...

the mix of poet and nature...such a collision.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Jacob. I am always affected by the moon

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

WOW, that was romantic and mesmerizing... there is something magical about lovers under the moon. As the song says "Because the night belongs to lovers, because the night belongs to us."

[Jack...]

Thank you so much sir.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The American Robert Burns is born! Jack the king of the love sonnet. Such beauty in verse and pictures.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. Looking forward to the super moon tonight.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Enjoy Jack, Enjoy and I look forward to your pictures!