Full Moon Waltz

Watch with me, see with me, dance with me, love with me

 

 

Full Moon Waltz

 

A simple spot of tree lined dreams

on painted skies which now retreat

unfolding evenings majesty (a’ balanced view along the ridge)

 

~for lonely hearts a foot path makes in vision’d quest and sonnet breaks~

 

Beneath these branches born of leaves

and cedar scents to fill the mind

to cast a glance of eastward flow (await of this which we do seek)

 

~a watch face offers in its shine, a different look yet equal time~

 

How bright this crown does now appear

above the rim of distant earth

igniting lover’s wakened hopes (beyond the shadowed silhouettes)

 

~anticipation breathes new life, awash in this sweet glow tonight~

 

For on this breeze, illumined love

of lighted bloomed chrysanthemum

enchanted kisses destined flow  (on moonbeam highways formed to trace)  

 

~so listen close on feelings meant and hear these words of love now sent~

 

As on this night a light does find

that two hearts dance the evening’s show

reaching for that full moon waltz (before our eyes, yet oh so far)

 

~as I now whisper this to you, forever will my heart be true~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[SyberRose]

Beneath these branches born of leaves
and cedar scents to fill the mind
to cast a glance of eastward flow (await of this which we do seek)

I love the title Jack as well as your beautifully penned poem...and enjoyed the format as well...very creative...:)

[Jack...]

Rose, thank you for such kind words on this Sunday morning. It is so nice to have you as a new friend and even nicer to read your poetry. I appreciate you stopping by.

[Sorry Infamous]

Oh! I really liked the format of this. Well done. This poem was wonderfully written. I could smell the earth, I could see light reflecting in the moon.

~for lonely hearts a foot path makes in vision’d quest and sonnet breaks~

Just beautiful, REALLY!
Thanks for sharing.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such kind words for me. I truly appreciate your visit.

[s y e]

This is so romantic, my friend. It's simply enchanting. The imagery is so vivid, you can see it all perfectly while reading it. The wording was simply divine. Loved it.

~ Noodle.

[Jack...]

Thank you my young friend.

[rhythm&blues]

Simply romantic and lovely, in light of the full moon, it's sheer perfection.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[Kristallo]

This is so lovely and enchanting. You really know how to breathe life into poetry with your brilliant use of color and organic description. The imagery is so stunningly vibrant here, and the love you express is of the tenderest and most treasured kind. I'm always so blown away when I sift through your pages, you have a brilliant skill that shines so much brighter every day. Great job, Jack. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend. I always appreciate the kind words you leave for me.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Oh wow, Jack! This is soooo romantic and so beautifully written. A wonderful love poem.. makes me want to dance under that full moon with a lover too.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Lori. I am deeply affected by the moon and last night's was spectacular.

[Ravyne Hawke]

yes it was.. I was quite taken by the moon too

[Pollai]

This is beautiful. I found it in really good taste considering the supermoon. You wrote this in a very loving manner, seemed like an effortless flow but there was complexity in your write and vocabulary which you presented very well.

These lines really struck me : a watch face offers in its shine, a different look yet equal time

Good write Jack :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

As on this night a light does find
that two hearts dance the evening’s show
reaching for that full moon waltz (before our eyes, yet oh so far) -- wow...fabulous lines.

I love your use of language, Jack. You are never without the ability to inspire the positive thoughts within me. Like a dance, this morning, your words wheel around with me as I sip my coffee and prepare for the day. I think your words should be required morning reading so that the world goes outside feeling a little bit lighter. :)

[Jack...]

Wow, now you are embarrasing me. Thank you so very much, truly if you only knew how much I needed that this morning. Your review is a gift to me this day that I will cherish. Thank you again.

[Marie]

I don't know if this is a sonnet, but I dare to call it that. A lovely waltz...

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Marie.

[Angel]

Another sweet waltz down a moon drenched page with my dear friend, the Don Juan of the Writer's Cafe.
Thank you for the dance, kind Sir...
Well done, Sweet Talk!!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my good friend.