My goodness, this is a gorgeous piece of writing. The words are full and aromatic, and so delicately sweet. Such a gift for illuminating the senses, you have, each choice of word is so charming and scintillatingly strung together, like christmas lights on the eve of a first kiss. This is so heart-warmingly lovely, Jack, in a style that you execution so masterfully that it takes my breath away in each read through. Immaculate. Well done!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so very much Kristallo. Your review is poetry to me, "strung together, like christmas ligh.. read moreThank you so very much Kristallo. Your review is poetry to me, "strung together, like christmas lights on the eve of a first kiss" That was beautiful.
Jack, Jack, Jack... What a glorious expression of love. You're definitely in tune with your soul's desires and express it so passionately on the page. Most men I believe have this place within. Unfortunately more often than not, there's a monster ego or fear of rejection that smothers that love - cornering it into a barred cell deep within! ;-)
double kudos to you, this is grand writing!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
My friend, I thank you for always offering such kind words to me. I keep my ego in check, I just wan.. read moreMy friend, I thank you for always offering such kind words to me. I keep my ego in check, I just want to make others happy. As far as rejection, I don't fear it because it has happened so much we are now pretty good friends. :)>
11 Years Ago
Haha - thanks for the laugh! Next time you pass by rejection, say "hello" for me ;-)
11 Years Ago
So that was you!!!!!!!!!!!
11 Years Ago
We had quite a tangle once ;-) next time rejection passes by me I'm gonna kick its little a*s... Of .. read moreWe had quite a tangle once ;-) next time rejection passes by me I'm gonna kick its little a*s... Of course I don't think I'll be near it ever again since I'm hitched - and if ever single again tI'm gonna be the old cat lady... Remember? ;-)
Yes I do remember...the old cat lady...sounds like a poem in there somewhere to me...be on the look .. read moreYes I do remember...the old cat lady...sounds like a poem in there somewhere to me...be on the look out.
11 Years Ago
Uhhhh ohhhh! ;-) oh dear... The 25 character police just got me - did I make it? Jeez, what is that .. read moreUhhhh ohhhh! ;-) oh dear... The 25 character police just got me - did I make it? Jeez, what is that new feature? Quite annoying
11 Years Ago
It definitely is. I am going to start writing..."Twenty-five characters say, that was a great poem.
I agree with our Kris, for this is exceptional writing dear Jack, To almost gild "definitive love" with the color purple, I do like, for it is innovative, headstrong, and what can make love grand ... in variety! This piece is just a ode to all lovers and, a beautiful message within. Thank you my dear friend! Fantastic.
- Elisa
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much dear Elisa. It is so nice to have you visit my pages again. I like making people h.. read moreThank you so much dear Elisa. It is so nice to have you visit my pages again. I like making people happy and if this made you happy, then I am happy.
11 Years Ago
Let's be so happy together Jack! for it did!! :) thanks once again, you bring the site always good p.. read moreLet's be so happy together Jack! for it did!! :) thanks once again, you bring the site always good poetry!
Sigh...You're making my prickly little heart soften like gum on a hot sidewalk. STOP IT! The second verse. That's the one that made me get all watery eyed - and gaze away from the PC for a moment and sigh. Such lovely imagery.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Tammy, if I made your heart soften like gum on a hot sidewalk, then I know my poetry has done its jo.. read moreTammy, if I made your heart soften like gum on a hot sidewalk, then I know my poetry has done its job. thank you so very much my great friend.
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..