Stand here forever

Please...

 

 

Stand here forever

 

 

Summertime fancies,

salt water taffy

Arcades that holler,

“winner take all”

 

Soft sandy beaches

the sunrise now teaches

That beauty can last

when the morning does call

 

Little known places

of memory traces

With post card adventures

on sun shiny days

 

Kite strings now hover,

as we dash for cover

For sudden the clouds

that bring on the rain

 

Under the awning

a new day is dawning

Now give me a kiss

so your lips I may touch

 

Stand here forever

no matter the weather

Right here in my arms

for I love you so much

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed I feel we could all take that stop, well done, good read.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Thomas

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful, as always, Jack. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend

[Ken Simm.]

Ah reminds me. Plank Lane Working Mans Club Trip to Southport. You've done it now Jack.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Ken.

[Baby Ricochet]

Lovely little poem Jack. Nice imagery

[Jack...]

Thank you sir.

[MimiW]

i really like the imagery here...especially "...post card adventures..."

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[Emerald Seas]

Definitely feel the balmy warm evening in this poem, Jack. It reminds me of young love - summers captured in snippets between the college years... Lovely penning!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sera. I always enjoy reading your comments first thing in the morning.

[Emerald Seas]

:) well then... good morning, Jack!

[Jack...]

Good morning to you too.

[s y e]

ωσω! This is superb, Jack! Don't you just love the beach, it just has that little romantic side to it as well. The beach has half and you have the other, ha. You are both romantics at heart.

"Soft sandy beaches
the sunrise now teaches
That beauty can last
when the morning does call"

You have such a beautiful, sweet way with words. I love how these poems just come from you everyday! The flow was amazing, it just rolled of my tongue, now bumps.
Just...
perғecтιon!

~ Noodle.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

Your poem has taken me to the Wildwood Boardwalk, eating that salt water taffy, hearing those arcades, strolling along hand in hand with my love... Very nice, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thank you much Rita. Wildwood was exactly what I was thinking of when I wrote this.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Rita. Wildwood was exactly what I was thinking of when I wrote this.

[Dhaye]

Awesome photo...amazing poem. So adoring.

"Stand here forever
no matter the weather
Right here in my arms
for I love you so much"

Who wants to be departed from his/her loved one? Of course, I wanted to be with my man every moment of the day.

Great job, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Dhaye. Your words have once again made me smile.

[Dhaye]

You're so much welcome, Jack. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Under the awning
a new day is dawning
Now give me a kiss
so your lips I may touch

Stand here forever
no matter the weather"
This one is great for it touches the different climes love can or should manifest itself done by a talented painter...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sami. I always appreciate your kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)