Stand here forever

Please...

 

 

Stand here forever

 

 

Summertime fancies,

salt water taffy

Arcades that holler,

“winner take all”

 

Soft sandy beaches

the sunrise now teaches

That beauty can last

when the morning does call

 

Little known places

of memory traces

With post card adventures

on sun shiny days

 

Kite strings now hover,

as we dash for cover

For sudden the clouds

that bring on the rain

 

Under the awning

a new day is dawning

Now give me a kiss

so your lips I may touch

 

Stand here forever

no matter the weather

Right here in my arms

for I love you so much

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

A sweet read. xo shallimarRose

[Jack...]

Thanks Rose.

[.]

Aww, so nice! Was fun to read! Keep writing!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[Cassie]

Beautiful poem which is nicely worded

[Jack...]

Hey Cassie, nice to see you. Thanks so much.

[C.E.K. Nelson]

Beautiful and light! Thank you!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[Seashell]

Ah the kiss made it all better...Something about kissing in the rain... very sweet...
Bx

[Jack...]

Thank you for your kind words.

[carol burgess romance]

love it such beauty in your words

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Carol. My Saturday is brighter since you stopped by

[carol burgess romance]

youi are welcome

[Sorry Infamous]

Love that blossoms in summer. Just some of those tiny little moments you wish could last forever. So many love poem here filled with sadness and yearning this one is a nice remedy to that with it's warmth and it's light airy depth. Love with no ache.

[Jack...]

Thank you again for your kind words. I do appreciate you taking your time to read my poetry. I will call up a few more of your pieces tomorrow, I find you to be very talented.

[Sorry Infamous]

I read and comment on what I like so no need to thank me! Even if you didn't like my work you would still find me here...

[Jack...]

Sorry my friend, I am a polite one, thank you just comes naturally when someone says something nice about you.

[TL Boehm]

do you know what came to mind as I read this?
Raindrops on roses and whiskers on kittens
Bright copper kettles and warm woolen mittens
Its one of those poems - that just stays in your mind - the lines just lend themselves to repeating....
Such a sweet poem. Light and joyful.

[Jack...]

Well, those are a few of my favorite things. :) Thank you so much Tammy. I just love getting reviews from you. I holding the door, but I may not let you leave.

[TL Boehm]

Thank you, Jack. I'm actually more of a stand and fight girl - so I think I'll just stay - hulk out and take out a few virtual blocks of real estate in an epic meltdown. Leaving would mean being silent - and I can't do that. (I'd pop a gasket.)

[Jack...]

Good, I like having you around.

[Astro]

I like this one a lot Jack, it is quick to read but full of good times and the amazing feelings that love can bring.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Astro.

[Kristin Lee]

I don't know why but this makes me think of the fair. Stealing a kiss on the Farris wheel, laughing in the rain...it's just so light hearted and fun. I really like this one.

[Jack...]

Thanks Kristin, my minds eye saw the boardwalk in Wildwood New Jersey which is a carnival like place.