If I fashioned you a butterfly

If I fashioned you a butterfly

A Poem by Jack...
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Butterflies are forever

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If I fashioned you a butterfly

 

 

If I fashioned you a butterfly

with platinum round its wings,

diamonds for its body,

would this your smile bring

 

The faintest hint of blue to see

in stones aqua marine

Would you keep it with you always

and somehow think of me

 

If I put it on a silver chain

that glistened like a star

Would you wear it every day

no matter where you are

 

Would it make you happy,

till all your days were through

If I fashioned you a butterfly…

and sent it off to you

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
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This is really cute, made me smile. A beautiful piece which definitely makes me happy.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Gee, this little poem must be filled with happiness as I am since you have reviewed it with such swe.. read more
You have fashioned me a butterfly with this poem...and it makes me very happy...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Wow, thank you so much Marie. I am happy I made you happy.
'Tis funny. In my newsfeed it says "I fashioned you a butt" =)) anyway, its real pretty. I would want to own that butterfly. Great job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. That is funny.
You have managed to take something that while beautiful could be construed as somewhat ordinary, and turned it into something absolutely magical. Meaning, if I recieved this as a gift my heart would leap, but if I recieved it as a gift with this attached my heart of leap, sing, dance, skip...your words have brought an entirely new demension to life.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sarah.
Butterflies symbolize so many things of beauty... what a lovely gift this would be. This poem floats like a butterfly, indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you Rita

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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