Take me to heaven once more

When into your life an angel comes...smile

 

 

 

 

Take me to heaven once more

 

 

So precious this love that my heart does confide

Warm as the touch of your skin

Bright as the joy that does beam from inside

Filling my cup to the brim

 

You are the thoughts in my mind everyday

Visions of beauty you send

Caring and kindness on constant display

Oh but to know you again

 

Many the years that I stood all alone

Wondering what would become

Of this my life, on a path all its own

Searching for my only one

 

Down from the heavens my eyes did perceive

An angel of wonder so fine

Standing before me so hard to believe

This day, for this angel is mine

 

Open thy wings for I want to come in

If you will have me this way

All as your own for a lifetime begins

Until the end of all days

 

Yours is the love that I’ve dreamed from afar

Here in my heart it now lies

Bringing a peace that does shine like a star

Up in the clearest of skies

 

Take me; oh take me, for I am to give

Happiness true it does pour

Love me unending as long as I live

Take me to heaven once more

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

This piece is amazing Jack. It's so tender and loving. "A peace that does shine like a star" This is one of your best. It encompasses those moments that steal your breath, that make you believe in love. Very well done.

[Jack...]

Thank you Kristin, is it made you smile then I did my job.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Beautiful write

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[Brett Pritchard]

Movingly beautiful Jack.
The healing power of love is indeed an elixir of which we could never tire.
Seems to make all of our problems and damage evaporate into the air like smoke.

Spectacular writing buddy.


BP

[Jack...]

Thanks again Brett. I appreciate your kind words.

[carol burgess romance]

very beautiful my friend

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

more and more and more terrific love poems come from your pen.

you weave magic feelings...and say what we all try to say (but never as well)--

i want to steal this, send it to my girlfriend, and pretend i wrote it...:)

[Jack...]

Be my guest sir, I'll never tell. :).

Thanks so much Jacob. I really do appreciate your kind words to me. You always leave such nice and often incitful reveiws of mine and other's work. You are a true gentleman and a great poet. I often read your work and think, I wished I'd wrtten that. You have a very unique way of looking at things and your humor is infectious. Thank you again my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thanks for the offer to use it...but then, she'd probably fall in love with you instead of me...
read morethanks for the offer to use it...but then, she'd probably fall in love with you instead of me...

so i guess, i'll just appreciate it.on my own..

:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and thank you for your very kind words!

[Frieda P]

I'm running out of adjectives for your work, can I just say 'sigh' every time and you'll get the picture, again, your poetry wraps around me as a gorgeous spring day and takes my breath away....

[Jack...]

I'll take a "sigh" from you anyday my friend. Thanks so very much.

[Angel]

The rhyme and meter are flawless and the language is simple and easy to read. This doesn't just flow, it sings, it dances, it shines like the diamond on her finger...
Ahh, it makes me weep for happier days, gone now, but not forgotten.
Thank you, my sweet friend, for taking me to heaven once more.
Really nice write from your oh-so-romantic heart.
Well done!

[Jack...]

Angel, no weeping unless they are happy tears. Thank you so very much for your kind words my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

"Down from the heavens my eyes did perceive
An angel of wonder so fine
Standing before me so hard to believe
This day, for this angel is mine

Open thy wings for I want to come in"
You amaze me how you do it Jack. For none of your writes are the same but they compliment life, love , all sorts of emotions and now angels....Awesome...:)

[Angel]

Yeah, I noticed that too...
One for the Angels...YAY!!

[Sami Khalil]

Yeah back to you too angel...

[Angel]

;-)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Jack...]

Werll, thank you both very much. Sami I appreciate you always and Angel, well here's one for you my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Rita L. Sev]

A lyrical cadence that drew me further into the read. As always, very sweet romance, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Rita. Happy you enjoyed it.

[Mark]

Wonderful rhythm and rhyme. so well crafted. Enjoyed the read.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Mark