Take me to heaven once more

Take me to heaven once more

A Poem by Jack...
"

When into your life an angel comes...smile

"

 

 

 

 

Take me to heaven once more

 

 

So precious this love that my heart does confide

Warm as the touch of your skin

Bright as the joy that does beam from inside

Filling my cup to the brim

 

You are the thoughts in my mind everyday

Visions of beauty you send

Caring and kindness on constant display

Oh but to know you again

 

Many the years that I stood all alone

Wondering what would become

Of this my life, on a path all its own

Searching for my only one

 

Down from the heavens my eyes did perceive

An angel of wonder so fine

Standing before me so hard to believe

This day, for this angel is mine

 

Open thy wings for I want to come in

If you will have me this way

All as your own for a lifetime begins

Until the end of all days

 

Yours is the love that I’ve dreamed from afar

Here in my heart it now lies

Bringing a peace that does shine like a star

Up in the clearest of skies

 

Take me; oh take me, for I am to give

Happiness true it does pour

Love me unending as long as I live

Take me to heaven once more

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
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This can be read from a religious or a romantic view point. Both are equally important. I love the picture that accompanies your poem, I believe it is from Angels in America. A beautiful job jack.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Anne, we've got to stop meeting like this, people are starting to talk. :) Thanks so much my great .. read more
Lovely the way your mind flows.. Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words.
You are the thoughts in my mind everyday

Visions of beauty you send.....awesome!!! great piece jack. loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

I appreciate your kind words Cassie. Thank you so much
Beautiful and touching like prayer! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Divya
That last stanza was absolutely perfect. Wonderfully done. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you, nothing is nicer than your sweet words.
The discovery of love as a religious experience, gives this a romantic appeal that will undoubtedly reach many. The love that you desire, if found can only transport us to heavenly places. Classic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Astro
Astro

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, 'Classic'.
A most beautiful piece that onw re-reads for the love of it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you Thomas for your kind words.
blissful, romantic, lyrical - it has a "wedding day" feel to it. such a lovely poetic plea and promise.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Tammy. I appreciate your sweet words to me.
Another splendid poem, Jack. Romantic and hopeful... I think I understand the inspiration that fuels your pen to write.
Fabulous, my friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank so much my dear friend. My inspiration comes from near and far.
~le sigh~ This was fantastic, my friend. You always write so passionately with such beautiful wording. You have such a loving, tender way with words. :-) Loved the imagery.

~ Noodle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my good friend. Your words inspire me to write more.
s y e

11 Years Ago

Your words can inspire anyone to write!

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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