Found in you

All of the things I find I love about you

 

Found in you

 

 

If you only knew

these feelings I clench in my fist,

locked in endless lingering,

breathing for only this

Painting a future

caused by eternal dreams

found in your…

 

Smile…

 

and I too shall smile,

laughing in flowered

blooms filled with heartbeats,

fragrances sifting

along alphabetical fence lines,

counting the letters

found in your…

 

Words…

 

send a message,

feeding desires of my visions,

fruited of vine fed bounty,

weaving about my skin,

tempting me to search deeply

the roots

found in your…

 

Thoughts…

 

flow freely

within my soul,

beyond scattered butterflies

on the top rung

of this laddered stairway,

padded with beliefs

found in your…

 

Love…

 

sets me free,

fits me with wings of chiffon renderings,

soaring to destined heights,

glowing in the shimmering rays

of a springtime sun

in the forever solitude I

found in you…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

Reading you today is like a roller coaster - and this one is on top of the slope! Sweet and affectionate.

"Painting a future caused by eternal dreams found in your… Smile…"

Now that is a line to melt a girl's heart! Great write, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Rita. Your smiling words are always my smile.

[s y e]

Jack, my dear, this is absolutely stunning! You really a romantic at heart!

The love you have for her is beautiful. If only every guy had this much for his lady, the world would be semi happier, lol.

Stunning as always.

100/100 faves!

~ Noodle.

[Jack...]

Wouldn't it be grand? Thank you so much my cute little friend.

[s y e]

It would be amazing! Ha, only in my dreams though.... Haha.

Always a pleasure!

[Sami Khalil]

"Love…



sets me free,

fits me with wings of chiffon renderings,

soaring to destined heights,

glowing in the shimmering rays

of a springtime sun"
The love that you carry for her Jack is ever like the radiant sun and the free birds that soar to destined heights...Well done...:)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my dear friend. I always appreciate your kind words. I just sent you an RR on this, so please ignore.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)