Found in you

All of the things I find I love about you

 

Found in you

 

 

If you only knew

these feelings I clench in my fist,

locked in endless lingering,

breathing for only this

Painting a future

caused by eternal dreams

found in your…

 

Smile…

 

and I too shall smile,

laughing in flowered

blooms filled with heartbeats,

fragrances sifting

along alphabetical fence lines,

counting the letters

found in your…

 

Words…

 

send a message,

feeding desires of my visions,

fruited of vine fed bounty,

weaving about my skin,

tempting me to search deeply

the roots

found in your…

 

Thoughts…

 

flow freely

within my soul,

beyond scattered butterflies

on the top rung

of this laddered stairway,

padded with beliefs

found in your…

 

Love…

 

sets me free,

fits me with wings of chiffon renderings,

soaring to destined heights,

glowing in the shimmering rays

of a springtime sun

in the forever solitude I

found in you…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A lovely and deep expression of feelings for someone special in your life Jack. Cleverly penned in a flowing well metered verse!

[Jack...]

Thank so much John.

[carol burgess romance]

Love thwse wonderful words of love.....

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Carol

[Dhaye]

So sweet, those ever romantic words...enough to own a woman's heart.
You're always impressive, Jack. Keep it up!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

"If you only knew
these feelings I clench in my fist,
locked in endless lingering,
Amazing poetry.

[Jack...]

Thank you Mehak, nice to see you again.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Anytime Jack. :) Thank you.

[redflutterby]

First I love the format...how the single word both ends and begins the next stanza. Very creative my friend. The content is all you. Beautiful and full of longing. Excellent piece Jack.

[Jack...]

Red, my good friend, thank you so much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for writing this beautiful love poem...sure can relate to this one these days...

that's how it progressed....smile, words, thoughts, love.

[Jack...]

Thanks for stopping by Jacob

[Emerald Seas]

It's a splendid writing of heart's longing and such a loving heart! Wonderful penning, my friend!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much dear Sera.

[Angel]

(sigh)
Sweet sweet words from our Sweet Talker...
Sweet nothings to whisper in her ear and make her swoon...
Sweet sweet love...

Oh, Jack, I love this sweet, romantic poem!
I love how each stanza builds on the last...
Absolutely beautiful.

Just whan I think I've read the best you could possibly give us from your heart...
(sigh)
You come up with something even more magnificent.

Well done, Jack, my friend. Very well done, indeed.

[Jack...]

Wow, thank you so much Angel. You are far too kind to me. I am happy you enjoyed it my friend.

[icelandicblue]

You have a glorious heart Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you Anne, and breaks for you right now.

[Mysty Johnson]

WOW this is breathtaking! And to have written this for a special woman... Romantic and dreamy!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Mysty for stopping by and leaving such kind words.