Found in you

All of the things I find I love about you

 

Found in you

 

 

If you only knew

these feelings I clench in my fist,

locked in endless lingering,

breathing for only this

Painting a future

caused by eternal dreams

found in your…

 

Smile…

 

and I too shall smile,

laughing in flowered

blooms filled with heartbeats,

fragrances sifting

along alphabetical fence lines,

counting the letters

found in your…

 

Words…

 

send a message,

feeding desires of my visions,

fruited of vine fed bounty,

weaving about my skin,

tempting me to search deeply

the roots

found in your…

 

Thoughts…

 

flow freely

within my soul,

beyond scattered butterflies

on the top rung

of this laddered stairway,

padded with beliefs

found in your…

 

Love…

 

sets me free,

fits me with wings of chiffon renderings,

soaring to destined heights,

glowing in the shimmering rays

of a springtime sun

in the forever solitude I

found in you…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

I will have to stop reading this romance from you... My head is spinning... lol... gorgeous rhyme and reason as usual.. ♥ Rose

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my sweet friend.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A fetching and mindful piece, well done. good read.

[Jack...]

i appreciate your kind words my friend.

[TL Boehm]

Thoughts…

flow freely
within my soul,
beyond scattered butterflies
on the top rung
of this laddered stairway,
padded with beliefs
found in your…

Love…

sets me free,
fits me with wings of chiffon renderings,

such a gentle lift of a poem. Like those thermals on a summer day....warm. upwelling...magical.

[Jack...]

Tammy, you are making my head swell and I already couldn't find a hat to fit it. :) Thanks so much my good friend.

[Astro]

This one didn't catch me right away but as I got further in and made a double reading of each 1 word line to end the section and start a new one it became a really cool piece. I like how you fit it all together and giving the overall intended emotion a bit more power with each section.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Astro. Just a little experiment in phrasing.

[Kristin Lee]

Oh, I really like this one. Its sweet nature is infectious. Great job.

[Jack...]

Thanks Kristin for your always kind words.

[Jack...]

To be found as such in someone, is bliss my friend, this is the amalgamation of love, the perfection of merging into another, to be one with. Romantic, heartfelt, intelligent, oldschool, and lovable. I enjoyed this so much, it's good to be back and read your splendid verses again Jack...

Just perfect.
- Elisa Laura

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you have returned.

It is such a pleasure to read you again. I'm happy too, to be back.

[LadySoDivine]

The first line reminded me of my favorite song, "If you only knew" by Shinedown. As usual, you manage to leave me speechless with your beautiful way with words, Jack :) Excellent write!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my good friend. How have you been?

[LadySoDivine]

I've been good, thank you for asking. :) I'm finally done with school, so hopefully I'll write a new poem soon. And how are you, Jack?

[Jack...]

I am doing well my friend. Just trying to come up with the next great poem. :)>

[Half Dream]

Another breathtaking write. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you very much.

[Frieda P]

Smiles, words, thoughts, love, it's all in there, another sigh worthy write from you fine sir, the picture is adorable, is this young love?

[Jack...]

It certainly makes one feel young. Thank you so very much my sweet friend. You are appreciated.

[Angi]

Mr. Romantic strikes again! Jack, you whisper sweet nothings so beautifully. I hope she hears you. Angi~

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Angi. I think she did, but just doesn't know it.