The Sweetest Music

The song of love

 

The Sweetest Music

 

So sweet the sound of violins

In melodies of endless wing

A symphony of floating feathers

On quiet breeze of velvet strings

 

Enchanting so, this music playing

Tender as the night is new

Harmonic themes we now do capture

Moments forming of the view

 

Listen as their song does take us

Far away on heavens cloud

In flight beyond this pure sensation

On this evening we have found

 

Beneath a moon of crescent shining

Here as only we can be

A sonnet formed in heart beat fashion

Smooth it calls so tenderly

 

Take my hand and I will lead you

Over hills of distant dreams

Along a path of gently swaying

Choruses among the trees

 

As destiny did pen the lyrics

Words we sing in harmony

My heart does hear the sweetest music

Every night you’re here with me

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Oh you silver-tongued one. Well done.

[Jack...]

Well it's kind of brown right now, just had some chocolate cake. :) Thanks my sweet friend.

Your visits = my smiles.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you and the feeling is mutual

[icelandicblue]

Such an inviting romantic poems. It sings of love in the most beautiful of melodies. Your romantic poetry is some of the best I have read.

[Jack...]

Anne, how fortunate I am to have a friend like you...I never have to worry about where my smiles will come from. Thank you so very much.

[Cassie]

ohhh so sweet is the music, you have depicted the sweetness so well in this poem.

[Jack...]

Thanks Cassie

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

One can hear your notes coming into us from the screen, well done, good read.

[Jack...]

Thanks Thomas

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Splendid write love! love! love! the colorful description

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Astro]

Some interesting metaphors throughout leading up to your final point. Personally, I like this section best and could be happy rereading it over and over.
"Beneath a moon of crescent shining
Here as only we can be
A sonnet formed in heart beat fashion
Smooth it calls so tenderly

Take my hand and I will lead you
Over hills of distant dreams
Along a path of gently swaying
Choruses among the trees"

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Astro]

You're welcome.

[Zahra]

Well this one truly sings, :) really beautiful. Nice drawing as well.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Zahra, though unfortunately the drawing is not mine. I do appreciate you.

[carol burgess romance]

I begin to believe you have an endless sting of flowing words that come togteher in harmony

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Carol. I was a musician first before I stepped into poetry.

[s y e]

"Take my hand and I will lead you
Over hills of distant dreams
Along a path of gently swaying
Choruses among the trees"

Wow, this was amazing, Jack. A lovely write about love, my friend.

Keep up the awesome work.

~ Noodle.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my good friend.

[s y e]

My pleasure, Jack!

[TL Boehm]

A quiet breeze of velvet strings. Exceptional!

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend.