To tell you I love you

Because I do

 

To tell you I love you

 

 

To touch you is to know you

To hear you is to sing

To kiss you is my heaven

To know the joy you bring

 

To dream you is my reason

To find your scent so sweet

To walk with you forever

To feel your burning heat

 

To call out in the darkness

To watch the sun now rise

To know that you’re my only

To see it in your eyes

 

To listen so intently

To offer only cheer

To dance about the city streets

To find you standing near

 

To glance in your direction

To taste your fruited wine

To share with you eternal

To know that you are mine

 

To hold you every morning

To whisper oh so true

To say what I am feeling

To tell you I love you

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Leigh]

As usual Very romantic Jack, the use of To worked

[Holly Mason]

very lovely write
these thoughts you share will have the ladies swooning and hoping
always written with you behind the words...beautiful
you are a gift my friend...
thank you for sharing...I have a really hard time picturing you writing dark...just sayin'*)

[Jack...]

It happens every once in a while, I have my dark moments, but most of the time love fills the air. Thank you so much Holly. Are you swooning? :)>

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

To indeed, a slight and touching piece.

[Jack...]

Thank you.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Awwww this is so cute,thanks for sharing

[Jack...]

Thanks for reading my friend. I appreciate your kind words.

[TL Boehm]

To call out in the darkness
To watch the sun now rise
To know that you’re my only
To see it in your eyes

That's just the BESTEST way to say it, Jack. When we see that love in another person's eyes. That's the lifechanger right there. Exceptional write. You are so consistent with your treatment of love in your work.

[Jack...]

Thank you Tammy.

[Astro]

"To taste your fruited wine" Mmm hmm. If only a person could say these things to someone else so eloquently and not be disregarded but be cherished is all a person could ask for. Very nice Jack.

[Jack...]

Thanks Astro, yeah I read this to myslef and even I didn't appreciate me. Go figure.

[Astro]

Read it left to right top to bottom this time. ;)

[Zahra]

Beautiful, nice ending. Really nice, fluent piece.

[Jack...]

Thank you Zahra

[carol burgess romance]

such wonderful words of love

[Jack...]

Thank you Carol.

[Angel]

Oh....
This one reminds me of my husband...did you know that I am a widow? It's been about six years now, since I had to say goodbye to both my husband and my son within a week of one another. A double blow I nearly didn't make it back from.
You brought my love to life again, with this piece...I can almost hear him whispering to me in your lines.
Thank you, Jack...

[Jack...]

Angel, I am so sorry, I did not know that. I am happy that somehow in my words your memories revisit you. I would consider this the greatest compliment have ever recieved. Thank you so very much.

[Angel]

Do not be sorry my friend.
I was loved. And we were happy.
Be happy for me.
And thank you again for bringing him back for me...if only for a moment...

[Cassie]

Yet another poem nicely penned by Jack. Loved reading

[Jack...]

Thank you Cassie