Rude to the nood

We miss you

 

 

 

Rude to the Nood

 

How can somebody just lay in their bed,

look in their head,

hear what they’ve said

and not understand that their actions

are nothing but crude

 

Sympathy sought, accusations they fly,

teenagers cry,

beat up with lies

they should be ashamed at their

being so rude to the nood

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Captcha - Pukka

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

Love it! And I love the picture, totally made me laugh.

[Jack...]

Thanks Kristin. Some like it, some don't, oh well, you can't please everyone. I appreciate you stopping by.

[Baby Ricochet]

I just entered one of her contests. I wasn't rude though.

[Jack...]

I would have never thought you would be. :) Thanks my friend.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Don't know what a "nood" is .. So don't get this at all .. sorry ...

Jazz

[Jack...]

No problem my friend. Some did and some didn't. It was written for a friend.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Noodlehead .... ?

[Jack...]

The one and only

[Jack...]

Someone was harrasing her via PM's and she was very upset about it, so I wrote this to cheer her up a bit. I think it worked. Thank you for reading, I forgot to say that. I do appreciate you stopping by.

[J. J. Nightingale]

:).......

[Rahul]

This time you wrote a short poem, what's a matter ?
i loved it again but quite confused why you dropped here a short piece as i saw in your writings that you write some kinda long pieces...but apart from it what i think is this write is perfectly suites on what you want to convey because there's or there was really no need to make it longer.
again you well penned.

[Jack...]

Thanks my friend. Just having a little fun on the weekend. I like to break up my styles every now and again.

[Rahul]

And i liked your this style, even it saved my time too in reading..lol :)

[AH]

I am new here....thought at first you were a good writer, I don't know who you refer to, but you seem a bit trifling and petty to me. You see, i went straight to the top writers list to find the best writers here. I honestly think now, that you may just be a manipulator and a total child. Sorry you are such a disappointment, and some of your friends, judging by their reviews, have some growing up to do also. This is immature tripe.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

If Eraserhead you are new and guenuine why is your profile closed?

[Jack...]

I know, how rude is that or should I say, immature tripe?

[redflutterby]

Omg....am I one of the immature ones?? Stfu and go hide behind your pathetic profile. It would be a lot less obvious if you went and harassed a couple other people instead of targeting the three you are. Hmmm?

[s y e]

Bahah, I think this is written for a certain 'someone', this really made me laugh! I loved it, Jack, I can always count on you to make me laugh, thanks for that, just what I needed! Loved it, that picture reminded me of me, Frieda pointed it out first! Ha!

[Jack...]

I am so happy this made you smile. Thanks so much.

[carol burgess romance]

Love this..it says so much and rudness is such a terrible trait in young and old alike

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Carol.

[redflutterby]

Lol.... how rude!!! Okay seriously you said it clearly here. And I hope she returns soon. Miss her sweet little heart terribly. As a child of divorce who was pulled back and forth by one party I know how hard it is for a teenage girl. ;-/

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Red. I appreciate you stopping by and leaving these kind words.

[Frieda P]

All I can say is you're genius, I'm practically rolling on the floor and I haven't even cracked a smile in days....it's that pic, love it, it's priceless!! It's really not one bit funny, but if I don't laugh I'll cry a river.....

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Frieda. If I made you smile and laugh, then my little poem did its job.

[Marie]

THe meaning of this escapes me.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Marie. Sometimes I just write and see what comes out.