Love is the key to endure

Love is the key to endure

A Poem by Jack...
"

Unlock love and you unlock happiness

"

 

Love is the key to endure

 

Caught in the motion of feathery mist

Blankets of moisture to play

Left all alone as my thoughts do insist

Singing your praises today

 

Long is the journey I found in this dream

Careful the steps I may stroll

Playfully laughing at all it does mean

Love that I just can’t control

 

I turn on the wisdom of feelings sincere

My heart longs forever this treat

Leaping the hurdles that blend in so clear

Silently skipping a beat

 

Capturing visions to keep evermore

Portraits of soft painted smiles

Brush stroked affection on canvas to pour

Looking beyond every mile

 

What shall become of the light on the hill

Flickering candles so bright

Honesty glows as it castings do fill

Now as this day turns to night

 

Butterfly wings cause a movement of air

Ripples to rest on the breeze

Waiting right here as I know you are there

Oh won’t you please come to me

 

Memories live as each day it does pass

Love is the key to endure

Hearts ever beating so long in the past

Craving what lies here in store

 

Under the shade of the sycamore tree

Branches now reach for the view

Come take a moment and lie here with me

Finding a love ever true

 

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Such a juicy read..enjoyed each and evry phrase

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Carol.
Another fabulous piece from you, Jack. You are such an amazing talent. Thank you for sharing. I couldn't critique you if I tried. :0)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

KJ, I appreciate you stopping by. Thank you so much.
You are so very good at these love poems, and you know what a cynic I am about love, lol. I like this one because it has that dream quality. You're asking the person to come be with you. The fliration and seduction involved with the cadle stanza are perfectly played. They aren't overdone like so many poems do. You definitly have the touch for these kind of poems my friend. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Kristin for your kind words.
Sounds like the perfect dream scenario Jack. When i first started reading I thought it could be love of poetry, but I guess it could be either. Poetry is a mistress to some extent, this speaks of more a deep caring that endures through it all, love does cross barriers that could never be withstood without it. Lovely and moving as always.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend. Happy you enjoyed it.
What a beautiful love poem! I love the imagery that you have woven into this poem.. it is written with a sense of dreaminess, but I can picture every image perfectly. I think with a tale like this, any woman would be crazy not to show up at your door.. and especially the one this is dedicated to. Great job Jack

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend.

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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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