Love is the key to endure

Unlock love and you unlock happiness

 

Love is the key to endure

 

Caught in the motion of feathery mist

Blankets of moisture to play

Left all alone as my thoughts do insist

Singing your praises today

 

Long is the journey I found in this dream

Careful the steps I may stroll

Playfully laughing at all it does mean

Love that I just can’t control

 

I turn on the wisdom of feelings sincere

My heart longs forever this treat

Leaping the hurdles that blend in so clear

Silently skipping a beat

 

Capturing visions to keep evermore

Portraits of soft painted smiles

Brush stroked affection on canvas to pour

Looking beyond every mile

 

What shall become of the light on the hill

Flickering candles so bright

Honesty glows as it castings do fill

Now as this day turns to night

 

Butterfly wings cause a movement of air

Ripples to rest on the breeze

Waiting right here as I know you are there

Oh won’t you please come to me

 

Memories live as each day it does pass

Love is the key to endure

Hearts ever beating so long in the past

Craving what lies here in store

 

Under the shade of the sycamore tree

Branches now reach for the view

Come take a moment and lie here with me

Finding a love ever true

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

Amore sung to the tune of Jack's melodious pen... beautiful words to read as I spend this day with my love!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Rita. Enjoy your time, the clock moves so fast.

[Flutterby aish]

you have described love so beautifully in this poem......just an amazing piece of writing!!!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your kind and sweet words.

[Lover Of Words]

Beautiful

[Jack...]

Thanks so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful description and journey into love. I like the detail of thoughts and location. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much sir. I appreciate your kind words on my poem.

[K.]

This is magnificent!
I love the rhythm and the last line is perfection.
nicely done.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Katherine. I truly appreciate you stopping by and leaving such kind words for me.

[Rahul]

wonderful write, last stanza was appeared with a great ending of your write.
keep writing. when i looked at your pic. that you pasted with your write, i got in my mind that that's what i wanted to read.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. I am happy it touched you.

[Rahul]

It didn't touched me and not your writing touched me, it's you and your thoughts that're amazing and comes from your heart touched me. If you've so much talent then why don't you publish some writings on a magazine ?

[Jack...]

I have a few published pieces but believe it or not, they are in the horror genre.

[Blue Ivory]

Your poem has the same effect as chocolate on me :3
It's so sweet I'm in love with it!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my sweet friend, kid of how your comments always affect me.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

What else can I say? This poem speaks so much about how love brings magic on our lives.

"Memories live as each day it does pass
Love is the key to endure
Hearts ever beating so long in the past
Craving what lies here in store"

Love is the key. Only love.... Great one!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Dhaye. Your kind words have made me smile this morning.

["writing by" KS]

Wow Jack. This is wonderful. The last stanza was amazing.
Sigh...
Thank you for Sharing this perfect piece of poetry.
:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much KS. I am happy you enjoyed it.

["writing by" KS]

You're welcome Jack.

[Sami Khalil]

"What shall become of the light on the hill
Flickering candles so bright
Honesty glows as it castings do fill
Now as this day turns to night"
Serene , dreamy , magical and real lovely...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my good friend.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)