Love is the key to endure

Love is the key to endure

A Poem by Jack...
"

Unlock love and you unlock happiness

"

 

Love is the key to endure

 

Caught in the motion of feathery mist

Blankets of moisture to play

Left all alone as my thoughts do insist

Singing your praises today

 

Long is the journey I found in this dream

Careful the steps I may stroll

Playfully laughing at all it does mean

Love that I just can’t control

 

I turn on the wisdom of feelings sincere

My heart longs forever this treat

Leaping the hurdles that blend in so clear

Silently skipping a beat

 

Capturing visions to keep evermore

Portraits of soft painted smiles

Brush stroked affection on canvas to pour

Looking beyond every mile

 

What shall become of the light on the hill

Flickering candles so bright

Honesty glows as it castings do fill

Now as this day turns to night

 

Butterfly wings cause a movement of air

Ripples to rest on the breeze

Waiting right here as I know you are there

Oh won’t you please come to me

 

Memories live as each day it does pass

Love is the key to endure

Hearts ever beating so long in the past

Craving what lies here in store

 

Under the shade of the sycamore tree

Branches now reach for the view

Come take a moment and lie here with me

Finding a love ever true

 

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Amore sung to the tune of Jack's melodious pen... beautiful words to read as I spend this day with my love!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rita. Enjoy your time, the clock moves so fast.
you have described love so beautifully in this poem......just an amazing piece of writing!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your kind and sweet words.
Beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much.
A beautiful description and journey into love. I like the detail of thoughts and location. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much sir. I appreciate your kind words on my poem.
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K.
This is magnificent!
I love the rhythm and the last line is perfection.
nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Katherine. I truly appreciate you stopping by and leaving such kind words for me.
wonderful write, last stanza was appeared with a great ending of your write.
keep writing. when i looked at your pic. that you pasted with your write, i got in my mind that that's what i wanted to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend. I am happy it touched you.
Rahul

11 Years Ago

It didn't touched me and not your writing touched me, it's you and your thoughts that're amazing and.. read more
Jack...

11 Years Ago

I have a few published pieces but believe it or not, they are in the horror genre.
Your poem has the same effect as chocolate on me :3
It's so sweet I'm in love with it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my sweet friend, kid of how your comments always affect me.
What else can I say? This poem speaks so much about how love brings magic on our lives.

"Memories live as each day it does pass
Love is the key to endure
Hearts ever beating so long in the past
Craving what lies here in store"

Love is the key. Only love.... Great one!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dhaye. Your kind words have made me smile this morning.
Wow Jack. This is wonderful. The last stanza was amazing.
Sigh...
Thank you for Sharing this perfect piece of poetry.
:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much KS. I am happy you enjoyed it.
"writing by" KS

11 Years Ago

You're welcome Jack.

"What shall become of the light on the hill
Flickering candles so bright
Honesty glows as it castings do fill
Now as this day turns to night"
Serene , dreamy , magical and real lovely...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my good friend.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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