Love is the key to endure

Love is the key to endure

A Poem by Jack...
"

Unlock love and you unlock happiness

"

 

Love is the key to endure

 

Caught in the motion of feathery mist

Blankets of moisture to play

Left all alone as my thoughts do insist

Singing your praises today

 

Long is the journey I found in this dream

Careful the steps I may stroll

Playfully laughing at all it does mean

Love that I just can’t control

 

I turn on the wisdom of feelings sincere

My heart longs forever this treat

Leaping the hurdles that blend in so clear

Silently skipping a beat

 

Capturing visions to keep evermore

Portraits of soft painted smiles

Brush stroked affection on canvas to pour

Looking beyond every mile

 

What shall become of the light on the hill

Flickering candles so bright

Honesty glows as it castings do fill

Now as this day turns to night

 

Butterfly wings cause a movement of air

Ripples to rest on the breeze

Waiting right here as I know you are there

Oh won’t you please come to me

 

Memories live as each day it does pass

Love is the key to endure

Hearts ever beating so long in the past

Craving what lies here in store

 

Under the shade of the sycamore tree

Branches now reach for the view

Come take a moment and lie here with me

Finding a love ever true

 

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Rhythmic and wonderful. I loved reading this! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Always your words make me smile. Thank you.
Another great romantic rhyme from Mr Jack. You sir are a fine poet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much my good friend
This is extremely beautiful, loved it. Great message, "Unlock love and you unlock happiness."

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend. Nice to see you again.
another great poem..!!1
well done..!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend.
Saumya

11 Years Ago

you are highly welcomed..!!
such an exquisite picture of love. For all my angst - I truly believe that there is a type of love - closest to its true design that is beautiful - giving in nature - gentle and breathes life. It is extremely rare that I pen that love - but I know it exists - even in my own life. It is just a bit silent these days. This is a poem to bask in, Jack.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Bask away my sweet friend. I am happy you found something in this poem to dream about and I know tha.. read more
"Butterfly wings cause a movement of air
Ripples to rest on the breeze
Waiting right here as I know you are there
Oh won’t you please come to me"

I loved this. You writing so beautifully and passionately. I love the honesty and heart you put in all your writes, Jack. This is simply beautifully. Definitely a fave of mine! 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Happy it brought a smile to your face. Thank you so much.
Ahh, yes.
You are a hopeless romantic, Jack.
Don't you ever put down that pen!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

I accidentally super glued it to my hand and have been stuck like this for some time now. Thanks so .. read more
OMG, Jack, so amazing poem, totally what i feel
thank you for reading, this goes to my fave ^_^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cara

11 Years Ago

and it is great to be back :D "sorry i'm just going to 2 schools, and you know schools :"
but .. read more
Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you for being my friend.
Cara

11 Years Ago

^_^ and thank you for accepting me
A touching and guided piece, one to treasure indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much
This is beautiful, Jack...but really, am I surprised? Hint: nope ;-) I enjoyed this a lot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Phasing out the O's just in case you stop by my friend. I also put the puffy sleeved shirts away for.. read more
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Ha! Always my pleasure, Jack...even the O's ;-)

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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