Find their hand

Find their hand

A Poem by Jack...
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Devoted friendship...always there Written for someone in pain...hoping she hears

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Find their hand

 

Alabaster dreams converge,

neither here nor there,

calling out to one,

finding they respond with a kind hand…happily

 

Eclipsing hate’s nightmare…patiently

 

Beyond the window waits hope,

blemished of a drawn curtain

and tempest fears,

which it cries for you…in tears of future joy

 

Sorrow fuels this hope…relinquishing pain

 

Reach, for inside a light does flicker,

a soft glow,

calming and peaceful,

beckoning the truth and offering a moment’s peace…quiet solitude

 

Holding you closely…feel its warmth

 

For within you lies a heart,

love filled and crafted,

leaping at the word go,

challenging thoughts that bare down…heavily

 

A friend’s hand helps with the heavy lifting…eternally

 

Find their hand, it longs your touch,

your smile, your happiness…you

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
Thank you for reading

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The image and title brought me here to read...
And this piece is Picture perfect..

I loved how it ended...

'Find their hand, it longs your touch,
your smile, your happiness…you'



Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you o very much. I love your avatar.
smilempsn

11 Years Ago

youare most welcome and ThankU :)
A friend’s hand helps with the heavy lifting…eternally

Find their hand, it longs your touch,
your smile, your happiness…you

This is beautiful, a beautiful gift for a friend. We're all the cure to each other's miseries, and sharing other's pain balances our own energies in return. I hope that this flows like warmth of happiness and peace to your friend's heart. Amazing piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my good friend.
Zahra

11 Years Ago

My pleasure! :-)
Beautiful, as always. ;) I loved how you wrote this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my sweet Butterfly
Awesome as always. Great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend
this was amazing....!!!
very well presented...


Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Saumya

11 Years Ago

you are highly welcomed..!
Sometimes the only thing that helps us get through hard times is our friends. You can count on your friends -if you trust them- to be there for you through your hard times.

"Find their hand, it longs your touch,
your smile, your happiness…you"

Lovely, Jack. You are such an inspiration and truly talented.

Posted 11 Years Ago


s y e

11 Years Ago

Yes it is. Unfortunately they are not always the best.
Jack...

11 Years Ago

My friend, you are young and still learning. There is pleanty of time ahead of you and believe me, y.. read more
s y e

11 Years Ago

I'm sure I will. :) You're so sweet, Jack!
Heart of gold, Jack. It shines brightly here. Our true friends show through in times of difficulty. Sometimes we get hit with the realization that who we thought would be there to lend a hand or to listen, sift through outstretched fingers like dry burning sand, leaving a mark and pain that lingers on.

I'm sure she got the message. Glad you are there for her and could voice your friendship and support.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Sera, my friend, you say that your muse has not been cooperating with you lately, but your reviews f.. read more
A friend’s hand helps with the heavy lifting…eternally

I'm so used to your rhyming poetry - but this one is just as beautiful and that line above....yes. That's the truth.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

I have been stepping out of my comfort zone lately, trying some new things. Thanks so much Tammy. I.. read more
TL Boehm

11 Years Ago

wipes the road weary residue from her palm off on faded jeans. Grabs the outstretched hand of a frie.. read more
Jack...

11 Years Ago

I promise
Simply the best, I loved reading it. Good job Jack

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Cassie
This piece made me feel like I was walking through a peaceful garden, or listening to one of my "zen" tapes for meditation ") queting the mind and finding a moment of contemplation. Such tranquility in these words. Well stated.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much. I appreciate you stopping by.

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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