In the Garden

In the Garden

A Poem by Jack...
"

Butterflies and you, nothing more beautiful

"

 

 

In the garden

 

 

Mosaic on the background blue

Subtle as it takes to flight

Gentle breezes lead the path

Shifting quickly into sight

 

Patterns find this open field

Welcoming of long we missed

Drenched in every golden light

Truth upon our eyes now kissed

 

Kaleidoscope placed images

Change with but a tiny move

Frolicking within the flowers

Charming is this early view

 

Hypnotic dreams in tiny visions

Soothing as it saunters by

Like your love does mesmerize me

So to does this butterfly

 

Beauty finds this form and fashion

All of what I see in you

Before my eyes a sweet refresher

Showered by a love so true

 

It takes to wing, this garden creature

Flying off so ever free

Still the beauty it does linger

As long as you are here with me

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
Thank you for reading

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this is the loveliest description for the loveliest butterfly...!!!
well done..!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend.
Saumya

11 Years Ago

you are highly welcomed..!!
"Hypnotic dreams in tiny visions
Soothing as it saunters by
Like your love does mesmerize me
So to does this butterfly

Beauty finds this form and fashion"
And you have fashioned a great poem full of the beauty offered by a mosaic butterfly and reflecting in the attitudes we hold towards love and the beloved. Magical as always kind sir...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sami.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
I feel like you could have omitted the picture, and I would have seen that exact butterfly through your words. Very nice, Jack!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rita. I always enjoy your kind words

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Added on May 20, 2013
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Tags: butterflies, garden, beauty, love

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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