In the Garden

In the Garden

A Poem by Jack...
"

Butterflies and you, nothing more beautiful

"

 

 

In the garden

 

 

Mosaic on the background blue

Subtle as it takes to flight

Gentle breezes lead the path

Shifting quickly into sight

 

Patterns find this open field

Welcoming of long we missed

Drenched in every golden light

Truth upon our eyes now kissed

 

Kaleidoscope placed images

Change with but a tiny move

Frolicking within the flowers

Charming is this early view

 

Hypnotic dreams in tiny visions

Soothing as it saunters by

Like your love does mesmerize me

So to does this butterfly

 

Beauty finds this form and fashion

All of what I see in you

Before my eyes a sweet refresher

Showered by a love so true

 

It takes to wing, this garden creature

Flying off so ever free

Still the beauty it does linger

As long as you are here with me

© 2013 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
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Butterflies are so beautiful...I love the image of "Kaleidaocope" and "mosaic"...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Marie.
who doesn't like butterflies. I so enjoyed your depiction of them flitting in a garden. Little bits of kaleidoscopic colors - ephemeral and vibrant. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. I always love it when you stop by.
.... I want to take a walk in a beautiful garden such as this, with a special someone. I hate heartbreak. Thanks for sharing! Wonderful as always.

Posted 11 Years Ago


eglantine

11 Years Ago

My friend is currently setting up a website for me. I know it will be available off of the publishe.. read more
Jack...

11 Years Ago

Don't be nervous, I am sure it will do great. Oh, Congratulations, I don't believe I've said that to.. read more
eglantine

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) means a lot
There is no greater tonic than a dose of your poetry Jack, this made my spirit lighten and brought a smile to my face. A perfect poem, a perfect smile on the page...you know how to get to me with your gorgeous poetry and blue butterflies, this touched my spirit and my heart. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my sweet friend. My day is always brighter when you stop by.
Such a flawless, vibrant poem. Really lights up a dim day.. beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your kind words.
soOO beautiful picture and lovely title... and perfect poem....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you sweet Maryam.
Lily Finch

11 Years Ago

YOU ARE ALWAYS WELCOME JACK :)
Oh, I needed some of these words right now. Your writing is always a lift to my spiritual side...such beauty in the boundaries of nature and creation.

The freedom of flying is something that is amazing, and the way that you wove love into the mix as well; brilliant, my friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my sweet friend. Happy it helped you to smile.
Love the photo with this poem. The writing - light and peaceful. A nice progressive movement of thoughts and imagery. As BR states, another swooner, my friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much dear Sera. Happy you enjoyed it.
Another swooner. Beautiful photograph too

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you sir.
I love butterflies. They are a symbol of beauty...freedom and hope. Your poem was filled with all three things and a wonderful tribute to the creatures. Just lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend.

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Added on May 20, 2013
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Tags: butterflies, garden, beauty, love

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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