Listen close

A nightime poem

 

Listen Close

 

 

Precious is the nighttime sky

With stars now shining down

A wispy wind does flow the trees

With but a hint of sound

 

Listen close and you will hear

As nighttime dreams come true

The whispers of the springtime wind

Are saying I love you

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Written for Icelandicblue's Minimalist Poetry contest

Reviews

[Zahra]

So beautifully expressing the experience of nights in spring. I can feel the atmosphere of this poem.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Zahra. I love hearing your comments on my poems.

[Holly Mason]

very sweet little write
like artwork and of course title*)
good luck- BREAK A PEN - now that was funny
thank you fine sir

[Jack...]

Thank you my good friend.

[gabrielle]

This is sweet. Hope you get the top award!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Gabrielle