Ripples

Somedays you just feel like this

 

 

Ripples

 

The ripples hypnotize

in synchronized patterns of tossed pebbles,

slowly finding that life is not a dream,

lying alone in the mire

 

Circular motions now distant,

touching an eroding shoreline still asleep,

weeping of moments lost

then slipping away

 

Fading into the deep

endless flow of hopes and wishes,

only to disappear

with little importance

 

“I am these ripples”

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[redflutterby]

I believe that every decision we make in life expands outwards to effect someone or something else. Much like a pebble thrown into a pond. Beautiful write here Jack!! ;-)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. Nice to see you here.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

stunning...

[Jack...]

Thanks Marc

[Holly Mason]

then you will arise on a different shore
you will be carried there by the swift current
being able to share emotions honestly is a gift some would not feel comfortable doing so
wonderful title choice
thank you for sharing ...now I will sit by the shore ,oh no that was south, I will sit by the gorge and wait for you *)

[Jack...]

Ok, get ready...here I come. Thank you so much my very good friend Holly.

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful write rippling with a hearache and a hopeful love that is eroding the shores of patience and wishing for peace ...
Another great write Jack...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[icelandicblue]

We float and hope the ripples don't turn into tsunamis. This also made me think of how our deeds are like ripples and we're never really sure the good or the damage they do until they hit the shore. Nice one.

[Jack...]

Thank you Blue.