Love is...
A Poem by
Jack...
What is love? Read below
Love is
Love is meaningless
If jealousy flies
Love is wrong
If controlled by the eye
Love is pointless
When taken apart
Love is hollow
If not from the heart
Love is empty
If sad is required
Love is hopeless
If it’s uninspired
Love is useless
If it is not blind
Love is vacant
If words are unkind
Love is good
If it stands tall
Love is perfect
Defects and all
Love is wonderful
When it’s returned
Love is amazing
When it is earned
Love is magnificent
When it is fun
Love is superb
When first begun
Love is glorious
When it is true
Love is the answer
When it is you
© 2013 Jack...
Reviews
"Love is perfect
Defects and all..."
That is real love - that we embrace the defects along with the beauty. A nice closing line - a message to a beloved - and who wouldn't want to be the Answer to the question of Love? Very nice, Jack!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so very much Rita.
Wow! It's true, Jack.
"Love is wonderful
When it’s returned."
Many thanks for this very beautiful piece. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Wow! It's true, Jack.
"Love is wonderful
When it’s returned."
Many thanks for this very beautiful piece. :)
11 Years Ago
Dhaye, it is always my pleasure to make you smile. Thank you so much
11 Years Ago
You're welcome. I always smile...you see that? I will always smile as along as there are people lik.. read more You're welcome. I always smile...you see that? I will always smile as along as there are people like you who appreciate this simple woman. Have a nice day ahead, Jack.
11 Years Ago
You are truly appreciated my friend.
Wow this is very nice, simple, sweet and thought provoking.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Wow this is very nice, simple, sweet and thought provoking.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so very much. Happy you enjoyed it.
11 Years Ago
You're welcome! :-)
Wow! Love it
Posted 11 Years Ago
Wow! Love it
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much.
Love is so many things...but it is very rarely what we expect it to be.
This piece made me smile...it is so "Jack" ;-)
Keep it coming, Sweet Talk!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Love is so many things...but it is very rarely what we expect it to be.
This piece made me smile...it is so "Jack" ;-)
Keep it coming, Sweet Talk!!
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much my good friend. This made me smile.
"Love is superb
When first begun
Love is glorious
When it is true
Love is the answer
When it is you"
I like this a lot Jack and all the definitions of love...Well done as always ...:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
"Love is superb
When first begun
Love is glorious
When it is true
Love is the answer
When it is you"
I like this a lot Jack and all the definitions of love...Well done as always ...:)
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much Sami
11 Years Ago
My pleasure...:)
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Jack... San Antonio, TX
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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all ..
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