Hopeless, a word with no meaning

Love is never hopeless

Hopeless, a word with no meaning

 

Found on the edge of desire

Facing the answers unknown

Desperate to stand in the fire

No longer breathing alone

 

Crying for deeds left a’ waiting

Rolling these thoughts in my mind

Oh of this love now creating

Searching for all I can find

 

Hopeless, a word with no meaning

Not that my heart will allow

Some they may say I am dreaming

None that can prove to me how

 

Real is the state of this vision

Nothing but truth stands so tall

Into her charms now my mission

Making such sense of it all

 

Reaching so I am not missing

Now as my knees touch the ground

Lips that I wish I were kissing

Perfect this woman I’ve found

 

Distance, the longest of dances

I follow the moon high above

Capturing all of my chances

Hopelessly, madly in love

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Angel of Heart's]

Superbly seamless and quite beautiful my dear Jack....each sentiment brushed my heart tenderly with an ache of needing to find such comfort in my own life.....an exquisite heart share....sigh

[Jack...]

Thanks you so very much my sweet friend. I am pleased it touched you.

[Sami Khalil]

"Hopeless, a word with no meaning

Not that my heart will allow

Some they may say I am dreaming

None that can prove to me how



Real is the state of this vision

Nothing but truth stands so tall

Into her charms now my mission

Making such sense of it all."
A beautiful romantic poem along the distance of love and seperation where lost chances are in the forsight in heartbroken sorrow.
A very heartfelt write...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you Sami. I truly appreciate your insight and wonderful kind words to me.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure . Any time...:)

[Angi]

What a beautiful love~from~afar~story! I want him to tell her!

[Jack...]

Perhaps he will Angi. :) Thanks so much

[C Gilliam]

This was very nice. It sounds as if it could be lyrics to a song. You can feel the passion.

[Jack...]

Thank you very much

[Kristin Lee]

I love that, "Hopelessly, madly in love." Don't we all hope to find that kind of romance? Sometimes reading about love or watching movies can make us feel gypt because we get a romantic notion of how things should be, not realzing how special what we already have is. But your writing is so bruatly honest that one could never lose site of what's right in front of them. "Real is the state of this vision." Brialliant!

[Jack...]

Kristen, thank you so very much. I always appreciate hearing from you and I enjoy reading what you have to say about my poems. Thank you again.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Do I sense a long distance romance in this piece? I love the idea, and the form and flow are right on (as always). Belief is a self fulfilling prophecy in many ways...where there is a will, there is always a way. I love the dreaming, sensing, touching nature of this piece, which is wrought with true, honest emotion. Nicely done.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Sarah. You never know about relationships, sometimes even a few blocks can seem like miles. :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Very true :)

[Zahra]

simply a beautiful romantic poem. Really nice and soothing to read.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ah, a romantic poem at its best! I agree that love is never hopeless. I live the idea of this: "Distance, the longest of dances
I follow the moon high above.."

Wonderful!

[Jack...]

Thank you Rita, I needed to ligthen the mood after the caffeine poem. :)