Hopeless, a word with no meaning

Love is never hopeless

Hopeless, a word with no meaning

 

Found on the edge of desire

Facing the answers unknown

Desperate to stand in the fire

No longer breathing alone

 

Crying for deeds left a’ waiting

Rolling these thoughts in my mind

Oh of this love now creating

Searching for all I can find

 

Hopeless, a word with no meaning

Not that my heart will allow

Some they may say I am dreaming

None that can prove to me how

 

Real is the state of this vision

Nothing but truth stands so tall

Into her charms now my mission

Making such sense of it all

 

Reaching so I am not missing

Now as my knees touch the ground

Lips that I wish I were kissing

Perfect this woman I’ve found

 

Distance, the longest of dances

I follow the moon high above

Capturing all of my chances

Hopelessly, madly in love

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Shivam Murari]

"Desire leads us to the answers." Yes, indeed, very true.
Distances, for true lovers, are nothing but a platform to test their love. That is brilliant. The title, sums it all up! You are truly quite romantic, Jack! :-)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much sir.

[Shivam Murari]

:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah. Nice

[Jack...]

Thanks

[InsanityWriter]

Lovely poem. :) Great job! ^_^

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my sweet friend.

[Nick.B]

Love isn't that hopeless, if you play your cards right, a great romantic poem that can easily become a song

[Jack...]

Thank you Nick.

[Emerald Seas]

Love may not be hopeless, but sometimes you have to let go of the hope to keep your sanity :) and move on. Just a thought that struck as I read your tag line under the title.
A lovely romantic serenade to the heart. So well written!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my sweet friend.

[Raven Cedrone]

This poem was so enjoyable to read. I found myself wishing there were more stanzas so I could just keep on reading along.
I am not the best at critiquing poetry as it is not my forte, but in my opinion this piece had a lovely flow and a beautiful tone to it, which makes me believe that it was perfect as it stands.

~Raven

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for you kind words, Raven.

[Raven Cedrone]

You are certainly welcome. The poem was refreshing for me to read.

[LadySoDivine]

This poem is so beautiful I honestly find it hard to even put into words. I can honestly say that you are one of my favorite writers of all time as far as love poems go. Excellent job! :)

[Jack...]

Wow, thank you, that is an honor coming from such a beautiful and gifted poetess as yourself. I am smiling from ear to ear. :) That is probably one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me

[LadySoDivine]

Well you're very welcome, Jack. And believe me when I say that you truly deserve it :) I'm glad to have made you happy, my friend.

[Ken Simm.]

The whole wonderful but the fourth stanza is more than real it is exceptional.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Ken

[s y e]

I love the story you tell us when you write, Jack. Well done as always, truly amazing!

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend.

[Dhaye]

Nice poem, Jack. I agree that hopeless is a word with no meaning because

love is never hopeless at all. So for me, the last line is "Hopefully, madly in

love." Lol. Just kidding. :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend