A Love is New

Love, what else?

 

A Love is New

 

 

A light shines

this beacon of truth, of hope,

sending forth its shimmering guide

when darkness falls…

 

~so lost to time~

 

a song is sung,

lifting to the heart, the soul

harmonies afloat the wind

in every step we climb…

 

~happily lost among~

 

flower blooms,

so sweet the scent, the charm,

painted in the color of nature,

their life a rising sun…

 

~somewhere beneath the moon~

 

a child smiles

without a worry, a care,

joy does fill its eyes,

life now begins

 

~in precious style~

 

a blue bird flies

upon the wind, the breeze

freedom claims its heart

in endless boundaries…

 

~before its eyes~

 

forms a view

within two hearts it learns, it lives

truth finds the dreams

eternal it shall be…

a love is new

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

'truth finds the dreams

eternal it shall be…'

a lovely structure to your writing, the images building in layers, soft, poignant images. fantastic.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words.

[Emerald Seas]

A lovely depiction of new found love and the budding romance that is to bloom. Nicely penned offerings with a fresh perspective. Lovely!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend, I appreciate you reading this because mid- to the end of next week is just way too long to wait for your always heart enhancing reviews. :)

[Emerald Seas]

haha - you're welcome, Jack! I've been trying to pop in from time to time, but SOMEONE thinks my attentions should be elsewhere than reading poetry! :) I'll be around a little... :)

[Jack...]

Go figure...some people just don't get it. :) Happy you popped in.

[Melissa]

Mmmm love has many facets, like a diamond. This is gorgeous

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my sweet friend.

[Sami Khalil]

"it lives

truth finds the dreams

eternal it shall be…

a love is new."
I like the form you used hear Jack and the message of truth . Without love the world would be a free for all evil ...Good one...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate you stopping by and leabing me your thoughts.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Ken Simm.]

Love, and praise every moment for it. This is the whole of the law.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Ken