Interesting piece. I'm not usually one for major repetition, but you have created something here that really sings. I believe it is the word placement and phrasing that makes this a success.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you my friend. Just trying to change it up a little.
I have to say, trying to read this out loud sure leaves you tongue-tied, but it is very sweet. It shows appreciation for your beloved, and it seems nowadays people are to busy in fast-paced lives to really acknowledge the true worth of those in their lives. Very nice.
Wow, I loved the repetition in this write, Jack. :) I love how I get so many RR's from you, I love the way you write, pure honesty. I love how you can do some many different genres, you had me babbling earlier on, ha. I loved this, keep up the out-standing work, Jack! :)
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..