Because of you

Because of you

A Poem by Jack...
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just because

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Because of You

 

Because of you

I learned to live

I learned to breathe

I learned to give

 

I learned to write

I learned to read

I learned to want

I learned to need

 

I learned to sing

I learned to talk

I learned to dance

I learned to walk

 

I learned to look

I learned to know

I learned to listen

I learned to grow

 

I learned to dream

I learned to care

I learned to hear

I learned to share

 

I learned to gain

I learned to teach

I learned to find

I learned to reach

 

I learned to smile

I learned to grin

I learned to love

All over again

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Interesting piece. I'm not usually one for major repetition, but you have created something here that really sings. I believe it is the word placement and phrasing that makes this a success.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend. Just trying to change it up a little.
Love makes us flexible at all times.
I am happy that you became such a versatile person "Because of Her".
Wonderful! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much
A song of the heart with the music of the soul...Just need a musician to put it to melody...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

I am humming in my head Sami. Thanks so much
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Hahaha...You are welcome...:)
I have to say, trying to read this out loud sure leaves you tongue-tied, but it is very sweet. It shows appreciation for your beloved, and it seems nowadays people are to busy in fast-paced lives to really acknowledge the true worth of those in their lives. Very nice.

Yours truly, Delaney

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Delaney
Wow, I loved the repetition in this write, Jack. :) I love how I get so many RR's from you, I love the way you write, pure honesty. I love how you can do some many different genres, you had me babbling earlier on, ha. I loved this, keep up the out-standing work, Jack! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



About
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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