Mother's day is only a few days away. Tomorrow is the 4th anniversary of my dad's passing. So today I am thinking about both of my parents - and its a struggle all the way around. The poem - so simple and light and full of truth. It is how it should be....yes. I'll stop right there....
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Tammy, I know how you feel...hope it help you smile a bit.
I wonder why everyone is assuming this to be written for your mother, why not your father ?
We're seriously nothing without 'em. They've always done so much for us, they've always been amazing teachers, the first teachers we come across. Well this poem is very simple and very clear, like to-the-point. Has a nice flow. Good job! Keep writing!
-Saima VI
Sounds like a nice tribute to Mom, or a mentor. Simple, clear message that rings truth.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much my friend. It just thought it should be said, but actually, I sent the Hummingbirds p.. read moreThanks so much my friend. It just thought it should be said, but actually, I sent the Hummingbirds poem to my Mom.
Very simple structure and very different from your other style. I liked it though. For some reason the only problem I had was the side of each line did not line up. Strong and worth reading for sure.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
yeah I saw that too, but was too lazy to do anything about it. Thanks so much
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..