Connected by a moonbeam

One thing we all have in common, no matter how far apart we are

 

Connected by a Moonbeam

 

 

So precious is this night

Solitude to share

Of simple fountains flowing

And whispers on the air

 

Pristine so the feeling

A ‘play about my mind

Sensing of the evening

What my heart might find

 

Connected by a moonbeam

Silver flowing light

Sent to you this evening

Shining ever bright

 

Darkness is the common

Of distant worlds to be

Though on this silent evening

You are all I see

 

One million stars a’ shining

Spectacular the view

As each one it does signify

The love I have for you

 

So on this night in April

If you do stare above

Know this joy you’re feeling

Are moonbeams filled with love

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Zahra]

Beautiful, we're all truly connected by this beam of light. Really very nice.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[InsanityWriter]

"So precious is this night
Solitude to share
Of simple fountains flowing
And whispers on the air"

Absolutely, positively, GORGEOUS! The imagery and flow and words are all perfect... Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful piece. I can't seem to say it enough... Amazingly done, you have true talent. :)

[Jack...]

I am truly humbled by your words to me. Thank you so very much.

[Veronica Chandler]

"Connected by Moonbeams" Such a lovely way to look at life and the ways we are connected despite the miles which separate us and highlights one of the many ways people are really united. Extraordinary, and beautiful piece.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Veronica. What a beautiful thing to say.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A very constructed and well though out piece that reads like the lines of a special text, well done, good read.

[Jack...]

Thanks a lot for your kind words.

[s y e]

Wow, that picture is beautiful. The imagery is beautiful in this write, dear. :)

"So on this night in April
If you do stare above
Know this joy you’re feeling
Are moonbeams filled with love"

The last stanza, is beautiful and sweet. Loved it.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my beautiful friend.

[TL Boehm]

So on this night in April
If you do stare above
Know this joy you’re feeling
Are moonbeams filled with love

now that is just plain sweet right there! Again, gentle and romantic and everything this type of little lift of a poem should be.

[Jack...]

Hey, you never know, we may see that same moon many times throughout the year. Thanks so much for being my friend and offering such kind words to me.

[Just Kim]

Such a lovely read, Thanks for sharing

[Jack...]

Thanks so much

[Dhaye]

Beautiful!

Our words are that thing we all have in common, no matter how far apart we are. We never see each other, but through our written works, we are connected.

Thanks, Jack. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you for reading and leave such kind words.

[Souladareatease]

Beautiful Beams You send out with this most Gorgeous write Jack!!!
Excellence Always!!!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sir

[Avocations of Amber]

beautiful.....love the images of the moonlight and the twinkling stars...... :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much