Sweetly singing...to you

Sweetly singing...to you

A Poem by Jack...
"

The songs of love, hear me as I sing

"

Singing sweetly…to you

 

 

Pathways lead,

I follow with my eyes closed

Sleek and slender the wings

of painted treetop songs

counted in measures

of bliss

 

Sunsets adrift,

tangerine lyrics roll the horizon

as silent emotions endlessly call

in echoes of promise,

lingering in butterfly

dreams

 

Destinations wait,

distances of eastward thought

where cities come to meet,

and skylines form your melody,

in choruses of acapella

brush strokes

 

Harmonies abound,

played of satin stringed desires

ballads float on silhouettes, listen

For all of this is my heart

singing sweetly…

to you

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
Thank you for reading

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This must be a lucky individual who receives these words of lyrical love. Beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautifully written. :) Superb poem. ^_^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks you my beautifully winged friend.
You may sing to me at anytime my dear friend, I've read you alot today - and I find you are a true talent.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so very much. I am humbled by your nice review
Your poems are songs of beauty and seem to have a rhythm all of their own when I read them..I believe yo are an old romantic Jack..Valentine

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

you could be right my friend, emphasis on old. :)

Thanks so much.
"butterfly dreams." This truly is a dream. What great imagery. I loved the word use and how it was set up. Great job. A fun read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Justin
if you paint anything like you pen poems...wow.

you have an artist's heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Jacob
...Sigh....pause...another read....and sigh. A deep resonant lump in the throat sigh. I love music. I don't write about it because it makes me ache...for so many reasons. But this is a vibrant psalm to it. Incredible.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Tammy, your reviews are always appreciated. Thank you so much.
This was so beautiful Jack. Actually brought some happy tears to my eyes :)
The power of love really knows no boundaries. Wonderful work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my sweet friend
What a lovely ballade, Jack. Beautiful, smooth - just perfect. I love the picture! I have a similar drawing I did about a year ago but different tattoo, and she's draped verses wearing a dress. One day, when I have time (which means probably years away!) I'm going to paint it and hang above my bed. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Emerald Seas

11 Years Ago

Enjoy what you're doing - as long as you are having fun with the process.
Does the end result .. read more
Jack...

11 Years Ago

No it doesn't really, I have found painting to be not unlike poetry, you move you brush and paint wh.. read more
Emerald Seas

11 Years Ago

Exactly!
Thank you for the beautiful sound created by your words here, Jack. It's so romantic to hear the voice of your love singing your love song.
Keep it up. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Wow, I do truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you so much for making me smile

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Added on April 25, 2013
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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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