Breathless, endearing, unending desire

Passionate love...always

Breathless, endearing, unending desire

 

 

Breathless, endearing, unending desire

Built on this foundation true

Providing all that your heart may require

Sending my love up to you

Pastels so vivid my mind seems to dance

Softly aglow on your face

Reaching for hope in a shade of romance

Lost and alone in this place

 

Smile so that I may see you

Laugh for I so long to hear

Whisper to me that our love is so true

Relieve my every fear

 

Catch me I think I am falling

Deeply within your sweet heart

Hold me, my love it is calling

That never the two of us part

 

Truly I sing of your praises my love

Pedestals beneath your feet

Lifting so that you remain up above

Making my world so complete

Sunlight, alone seems to capture your sheen

Warm as the day comes to be

Places now sit at the edge of my dreams

Won’t you please come here with me

 

Take me, for I am your only

Feel me, I long for you touch 

Fill in my soul ever lonely

You I have needed so much

 

Ask and I’ll answer you loudly

If love it can last evermore

Listen, I say it so proudly

You are the one I adore

 

Sitting in awe of affectionate power

Cool is the feel on my skin

Shelter does come from a passing day shower

Since you have let me come in

Now till the day that my life does expire

I will forever love you

Breathless, endearing, unending desire

Built on this foundation true

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Jayden Ireton]

"reaching for hope in a shade of romance". wow. This is a powerful piece. It brings up smiles while I think of summer romances. Great piece.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Justin. I see you have a few new pieves up, I'll be over to check them out shorty.

[Jack...]

I meant pieces.

[LadySoDivine]

I was captivated by the title and I just had to read it.
In all honesty, I'm a very lazy person and anything that even seems long to read, if in that moment I don't have the determination, I will not read it.
But I can truly say that this was very much worth the read. I can relate a lot to this piece, as I am sure anyone who loves someone can. The emotion and the beautiful words you used, all combined in one piece make this a very invigorating write. Once again, wonderful piece. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much and I am happy you stuck around to read it. :)>

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Take me, for I am your only

Feel me, I long for you touch

Fill in my soul ever lonely

You I have needed so much



Ask and I’ll answer you loudly

If love it can last evermore

Listen, I say it so proudly

You are the one I adore


So sweet dreamy lines, I love the above, thanks for sharing this lovely and wonderful write Mr. Jack it could be a song.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Marc for your inspiring review of my work. It is always appreciated

[Shivam Murari]

A true proposal :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much.

[Holly Mason]

love will protect ones soul
capturing love that will last forever-beautiful
always such lovely thoughts your words bring
love your title choice
thank you for sharing fine sir

[Jack...]

Thank you for reading fine lady.

[icelandicblue]

The meter and flow of the poem is mesmerizing. To be let in from the ravages and storms of life is to find sanctuary behind the walls of love. This is a terribly romantic poem.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your sweet words. I always value your reviews

[Zahra]

Amazing. Full of passion and beauty like always.

[Jack...]

Thanks, I appreciate you leaving such kind words for me

[Veronica Chandler]

Thank you for writing! Please don't ever stop, for your way with words have mystical powers. Your pieces sure do capture such a beautiful spirit, such that they can transport us to another place and time.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much dear Veronica.

[Rita L. Sev]

A swoon-worthy poem, Jack. Truly beautiful and heartwarming.

[Jack...]

Thank you Rita.

[Sami Khalil]

"Take me, for I am your only

Feel me, I long for you touch

Fill in my soul ever lonely

You I have needed so much



Ask and I’ll answer you loudly

If love it can last evermore"
The power of words and passions in a love-filled poem...You make women swoon and sway ...:)
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[Jack...]

Thank you so much dear poet. Your words always thrill me.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)