Neon

A little fun on a WhyNot Wednesday

 

 

 

 

Desperate,

for but a touch,

a smile found within a glance

 

Drunk along

this tavern’d dream,

self assured in barstool stance

 

Whispering,

the empty shaker,

echoing this questioned chance

 

Salted bliss,

of heaven’s calling,

as my mind lives in a trance

 

Slice the lime,

dust the hardwood,

care to join me for a dance

 

Come to me,

my Margarita,

the neon shines of true romance

Author's Note

A little fun for a why not Wednesday

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Souladareatease]

Lightin' up the joint Jack with this work!!!
Excellence!!!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much

[Zahra]

fun to read. You always show us that you truly are a versatile poet. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you, this was just my fun side coming out.

[Zahra]

glad to see this side of you. :)

[Shivam Murari]

I like the way you describe heaven's calling as a 'salted bliss'. Very good poem. Worth reading :)

[Jack...]

Thanks my friend

[Holly Mason]

libations liberation ....
and aren't they usually half priced on wed?*)
cute idea comes across with tipsy fun
thank you for sharing fine sir

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Holly. Frozen or on the rocks?

[carol burgess romance]

love how you personified this drink...fun to read

[Jack...]

Just having a little fun. Thanks so much

[carol burgess romance]

welcome

[Just Kim]

I adored this write, wonderful

[Jack...]

Thanks so much

[Talal Hussain]

Very well composed :-)

[Jack...]

Thank you

[KeelyJane]

:0) this was cleverly penned and fun. as always you inspire me. thanks for sharing

[Jack...]

Thank so much for stopping by KJ. Nice to see you.

[Matt Millsaps]

Very well written. Conveyed great imagery! Thanks for sharing

[Jack...]

Thanks for reading