This wouldn't happen

Or would it?

 

This wouldn't happen

by jack

 

This wouldn't happen

if people would think

This wouldn't happen

if people did care

This wouldn't happen

if people did drink

Anyone got a

cold beer they can spare?

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Marie]

Nothing like sitting down over a civilized drink...though it's my understand that liquour is what helped get W/C to this point...

[Jack...]

Perhaps you are right Marie, but I only asked for one beer. :)>

[keyvan]

beautiful....I translate this poem for Turkish and Persian for my Iranian and turke friend...If you let me....

[Jack...]

That would be just fine with me. Thank you so much.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I like this one...very different from your typical style. You have an interesting way of putting things that really grabs my heart. I see a metaphor here :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend...just trying to loosen the tension a bit around here.

[Valentine]

I was born into a non drinking family..we all had other faults..if it isn't booze, drugs, children only having one parent, or what happened in Boston..don't you think we could be happier people..if we tried to avoid all of the bad things that destroy families and people..Kathie

[Jack...]

Kathie, you are correct, I was just having a little fun here...an attempt to lighten the mood around here.

[Emerald Seas]

Beer's in the frig - help yourself! :)
Cheers!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sera...just trying to lighten the mood a little

[Emerald Seas]

Good call! :)

[Terohime]

Love it! The Ending was perfect fir this poem. good work.
~Your friend Res

[Jack...]

Thanks so much

[Terohime]

anytime ^^
~Res

[Monster ^.^]

Not a drinker. But finished a whole bottle once, before. Well, I don't need them as long as there are good ones to read! :)

It's been a long time Jack! and you still write in that Elegant way, good to know. I am always searching for something like your writings, but yours is one of a kind: and lovely! :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much

[Veronica Chandler]

I got a cold one...My head cannot stop turning back and forth.
Excellent write

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Veronica. Just having a little fun

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well I'm irish so I always have a spare beer! good piece.

[Frieda P]

No but I could sure use a cool one right about now!...Cheers Jack, you put a big cheesy grin on my face :D

[Jack...]

Thanks Frieda.