This wouldn't happen

This wouldn't happen

A Poem by Jack...
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Or would it?

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This wouldn't happen

by jack

 

This wouldn't happen

if people would think

This wouldn't happen

if people did care

This wouldn't happen

if people did drink

Anyone got a

cold beer they can spare?

© 2013 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Haha, this made me laugh! it was a great, fun, witty write. Different from your usual but amazing as always!

"Anyone got a
cold beer they can spare?"

Loved it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks my friend. Just don't let Frieda catch you with that beer.
s y e

10 Years Ago

I'll hide. You have to cover for me though.
The first round is on me, I'm sure we can put the world to rights

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank so much Leigh
I'll have a cold one with ya anytime! Loved this simple piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Angi
Ha! Sure, belly on up to my bar, Jack...there is always room for one more. But I usually find myself going the other way, saying "This wouldn't happen if I didn't drink" xD Great stuff.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Kimmer
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Always my pleasure, Jack...
Hmmmm. This wouldn't have happened unless you had a wonderful idea and developed it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank so much Ken
I don't drink and don't plan on it, but this is a fun write. :) Nicely done. (;

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Good for you...thanks a bunch
Oh yeah, made my day with this one, great work

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Nick
LOL.... xo Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks
LOL, I prefer a much darker beer or a fine glass of wine.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

I like mine less filling...thanks.

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Added on April 15, 2013
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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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