This wouldn't happen
A Poem by
Jack...
Or would it?
This wouldn't happen
by jack
This wouldn't happen
if people would think
This wouldn't happen
if people did care
This wouldn't happen
if people did drink
Anyone got a
cold beer they can spare?
© 2013 Jack...
Author's Note
Thank you for reading
Reviews
Haha, this made me laugh! it was a great, fun, witty write. Different from your usual but amazing as always!
"Anyone got a
cold beer they can spare?"
Loved it!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thanks my friend. Just don't let Frieda catch you with that beer.
10 Years Ago
I'll hide. You have to cover for me though.
The first round is on me, I'm sure we can put the world to rights
Posted 11 Years Ago
The first round is on me, I'm sure we can put the world to rights
11 Years Ago
Thank so much Leigh
I'll have a cold one with ya anytime! Loved this simple piece!
Posted 11 Years Ago
I'll have a cold one with ya anytime! Loved this simple piece!
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much Angi
Ha! Sure, belly on up to my bar, Jack...there is always room for one more. But I usually find myself going the other way, saying "This wouldn't happen if I didn't drink" xD Great stuff.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ha! Sure, belly on up to my bar, Jack...there is always room for one more. But I usually find myself going the other way, saying "This wouldn't happen if I didn't drink" xD Great stuff.
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much Kimmer
11 Years Ago
Always my pleasure, Jack...
Hmmmm. This wouldn't have happened unless you had a wonderful idea and developed it.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Hmmmm. This wouldn't have happened unless you had a wonderful idea and developed it.
11 Years Ago
Thank so much Ken
I don't drink and don't plan on it, but this is a fun write. :) Nicely done. (;
Posted 11 Years Ago
I don't drink and don't plan on it, but this is a fun write. :) Nicely done. (;
11 Years Ago
Good for you...thanks a bunch
Oh yeah, made my day with this one, great work
Posted 11 Years Ago
Oh yeah, made my day with this one, great work
LOL.... xo Rose
Posted 11 Years Ago
LOL.... xo Rose
LOL, I prefer a much darker beer or a fine glass of wine.
Posted 11 Years Ago
LOL, I prefer a much darker beer or a fine glass of wine.
11 Years Ago
I like mine less filling...thanks.
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Jack... San Antonio, TX
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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all ..
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