While standing in the sun

Summer is almost here

While standing in the sun

by jack

 

I take the sun in summer skies

in waves of warmth so free

Beginning with the morning rise

until the end I see

 

For I shall bask in lonely dreams

so bright that they have come

To find the reason that it means

to stand out in the sun

 

For of theses day my skin does turn

a glowing color red

If wind breaks soft, yet I shall learn

these thoughts inside my head

 

To catch a glimpse of golden shine

I call for what is new

As moments fight with borrowed time

then cast these feelings true

 

For I shall wait alone this day

within the grasses tall

Along a breeze, they tend to sway

in spite of what is all

 

And count the season's tender beams

each hour one by one

And lose myself within my dreams

while standing in the sun

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Valentine]

Sorry that you closed your site, Valentine

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful. (: Excellent write, as always! ;)

[Jack...]

I hope you know I do appreciate you reading my work. It is always a joy to hear from you.

[InsanityWriter]

It's a joy to read! ;)

[Constance Payne]

I love the feeling of standing in the sunlight loosing yourself to the warmth in a moments stolen thought.....beautiful....

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[shallimarRose]

The last line says it all..
"And lose myself within my dreams
while standing in the sun"

I love laying out in the sun (sitting standing) It somehow clears my head..

Always and enjoyable read from you Jack. xo Rose

[Jack...]

Thank you so much sweet Rose. I truly appreciate your kind words.

[Distant horizons]

A wonderfully penned slice of nature in all her glory

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[LadySoDivine]

I simply adore the nature that you portray in your work. It makes me feel as if I'm in the place that you're speaking of. Amazing job, once again. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you my sweet friend. Your reviews are the sunshine of my day.

[s y e]

Oh my God! What I would do for a sunny day right now! Just a teeeeeny tiny bit would do, 5 minutes even, haha.

This was a great write, Jack! Loved it!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[gabrielle]

There was a time that all I longed for is the coming of summer as I believed that all beautiful things happen during this season. Though the weather in our country is now becoming too insanely hot, this piece just brought me back to my carefree summer days. Exceptional piece.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Gabrielle. Not too hot yet, but your are correct, it is getting there.

[Sam Gregory]

This reminded me of late afternoon winter sun shining through the window so you can see all the handprints on it.. Ohh, what I just said is quite good, imam use that haha. Anyway, I like the smooth flow of ur work, all ur work in general tbh. U never fail to deliver the quality that is now expected of you :) Good work. This is the poem that brightened my Monday

[Sam Gregory]

*I'll use that.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. Happy to hear it brightened your day.

[Sam Gregory]

No problem :)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Hmm I love sunny days and I've always thought about sunny days being better and positive. Really nice poem.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much dear Mehak

[Mehak Mushtaq]

:)