I pick a Yellow Daffodil

Love in the springtime

I Pick a Yellow Daffodil

by jack

 

O’ precious stars of heavens light

So loving is thy glow

With moon aloft a golden sight

Across the fields does show

 

The days of wandering alone

Will soon come to an end

Beneath the glistening that’s shown

My very heart I send

 

Of natures gracious majesty

My tired eyes do see

The beauty that is brought this day

To stand in front of me

 

A portrait of a love that’s real

In painted colored lines

No longer can my heart conceal

The truth that you are mine

 

Along a grassy pathway walk

I breathe the morning air

Of wonders sent to fill my mind

For always you are there

 

I pick a yellow daffodil

And hold it to the sky

For all to see my love for you

And those who wonder why

 

I say these words in honest truth

So deeply from inside

This smile you see is ample proof

No longer can it hide

 

So shout it through the valley green

Beneath the stars above

Forever let them shine on you

The precious girl I love

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

Oh Jack... she is a lucky girl... This just drips with beauty and love.. I love coming here to read.. Rose

[Jack...]

Thank you so much sweet Rose. I appreciate your visits

[Sam Gregory]

Such a warm, glow of a poem, the love expressed is one anyone would be happy to receive. Good work, nice to read something positive. Flows smoothly aswell

[Jack...]

Thanks so much

[s y e]

This was a great write, I really enjoyed it! It was beautiful!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much

[Marie]

I think Wordworth's heart leapt up when he beheld daffodils...or maybe it was a bird...
Anyway your poem captured the essence of the beautiful daffodil...

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Marie

[rnuff]

Very beautiful write Jack! enjoyed

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[Holly Mason]

so very beautiful truly
I sit and read your work and it kisses my soul
I hate when you do this heart stirrings for me...twit!
this is a lovely way to start my Friday
I thank you kindly fine sir

[Jack...]

Thank you Holly. Happy it made you smile.

[S]

Its very intricate, how you've described the love for this girl.....Very old school poetry which is found so less nowadays...and i like the structure of this one....fine work sir.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much