On the Wings of Destiny

Destined love, the magic of life

On the Wings of Destiny

by jack

 

On the wings of destiny I ride o’er softly whispered air

Knowing pure horizon’s light shall find the future standing there

Waiting so with open arms of hope, I plead to reel me in

Finding proof as meant to be our love once more it did begin

 

Staid of true integrity, my heart doth call thy precious name

Painted on the heavenscape among the amber burning flame

Pristine lie the shadows in an valley born of glowing stone

Beauty shares thy perfect form the purest I hath ever known

 

My eyes they well of appetite so needed is thy precious face

Cornered by the memories as now I take my common place

Tiny dove adorn thy crown O’ brow of halo’s shine doth wake

An angel stands before mine heart, a hand I reach so far to take

 

Silken as a summer’s rain doth pour upon my waiting palm

Senseless vulnerability agape among the evening calm

Pleasure seeps of every pore; thy love hath set my heart a’ free

For this my time hath brought me to, the very man I’m meant to be

 

Days of long ago have passed as withered fruit upon the stage

Meanings of so many years across the folded chapter’s page

Stories short to keep in stride, a truth shall come to bear as free

Emptiness defines the days thy love stood very far from me

 

Obstacles of studded walls with wire strewn atop their crest

Built by good intentions, flowing rivers heading east and west

Locks of rusted metals form a chain that spans the pathway wood

Tense does bring a journey as the sweat doth pour of greater good

 

Flowers line the meadows play, to reach, so far they lie in still

Blooms, the colors catch the eye; I gasp as then forever will

Whence the time doth find its fame the two will be as one again

Staring down the faceless fears in knowing that our love shall win

 

Destiny, my life does greet, for in the after glow of light

As calm foresees the future, cast of vibrant shades of pastel white

Hearts a’ fire burn their flame to warm the space we quiet lie

For now the evening whistles of the passing night of which we fly

 

Take to flight thy early storm for as the sun does break the chain

I find that avenues of hope forever shall begin the same

With one step, the direction known, to reap the harvest of your keep

Where, found beneath my tattered gown, thy beauty it does wander deep

 

Silhouettes of what to come, upon a golden tapestry

Are woven, intertwined the threads, in patterns formed of only thee

I ride these wings of destiny upon the whispered air so fine

For as I head towards the east, is written that thy love be mine    

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

man your style is all on iots own.i try to think in terms of so many syllables but i cannot.master your work. ou are just immensely talented .And a nice guy
tate

[Jack...]

Thank so much

[Nestor Gonzalez]

you kick butt man i love it,also thanks for reminding me why i'm inferior to many of the writers here! >:b hahaha but seriously this is awesome it speaks emotions transcending language.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much and in my opinion, everyone on here is good. I enjoy everything I read.

[Nestor Gonzalez]

no problem looking forward to reading more of your art soon :]

[Kristallo]

Extraordinary... your word choice here is immaculate, delicate, and charming. I was so enraptured in your prose, I read it three times through as I let the vivid beauty of it absorb and enamor my heart. This is true blissful testimony to love, alight with all of natures profound beauty, written with such artistic finesse... The first line is electric, and each one afterward is in itself so lovely that I could not choose one verse I liked more than the other.... well done, this is poetry that shines the soul.

[Jack...]

Wow, thank you so very much. I truly appreciate these kind words on this April evening. I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem.

[Kristallo]

The pleasure is mine. I really adore your work. :) Hope you're having a delightful evening, write on, my friend.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

"Silhouettes of what to come, upon a golden tapestry"--I love this line.

So many great images in this piece. This is a big chunk of a write, and yet it did not in any way feel daunting. The imagery is beautiful throughout, and the words are so light and lovely. Well done, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. I always appreciate what you have to say.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Tiny dove adorn thy crown O’ brow of halo’s shine doth wake..........so beautiful Jack! exquisite!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Neva

[Sami Khalil]

You did go to town on this write Jack . You are on the wings of destined love and fame . You are a creative writer for I admire how you use words and imagery all in a marvelous way ....

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. Happy you ejoyed it.

[Sami Khalil]

I did. You are always welcome...:)

[Emerald Seas]

A beautiful read first thing this morning. Full of hope for all desires to be fulfilled. A touching write, Jack. Every time I read one of your works, it speaks to me in a soulful way. Very appreciative of you sharing your talented words with us. Thank you. A calming thought that sets the mood for today.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much sweet Sera. I am happy you found this enjoyable this Thursday morning. You kind words are always perfect for my mornings.