A Meanigful Glance

I look at you and I see everything

 

 

 

 

A Meaningful Glance

by jack

 

Pristine of visions the world it might be

In colors afforded the eye

Waterfall vistas forever to see

Underneath violet skies

 

Roses a’ bloom in the gardens of spring

Pebbles awash on the shore

Bluebirds of summer, the songs that they sing

Valleys of green ever pure

 

Oceans majestic in aqua marine

Mountaintops capped white with snow

Slowly meandering crystal clear streams

All through our life they do flow

 

Still they lie pale in accordance to truth

Fragrant the scent of romance

Deep in your eyes is where I find the proof

All in a meaningful glance

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful. :) The picture fits it perfectly. ^_^

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[Wórdsmíth]

Oceans majestic in aqua marine
Mountaintops capped white with snow
Slowly meandering crystal clear streams
All through our life they do flow...well, man, i think you're reachin' out fastly. you're writin' so many good piece's and that'a a good thing for you to write, and for me to read such kinda piece's...lol, lovely one again.
beautiful write.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much

[Nick.B]

"Oceans majestic in aqua marine
Mountaintops capped white with snow

Once again a great poem, from a great writer...great job, very romantic and teen spirited

[Jack...]

Thank so much Nick.

[Veronica Chandler]

This write is a delight to my senses has me feeling like the hikes I would take along the wild coast of northern California, especially the lines,
"Oceans majestic in aqua marine
Mountaintops capped white with snow"
Very beautiful

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Veronica. Now would that be hikes as one of the little girls or hikes as an adult?

[Veronica Chandler]

More as an adult...although the "Oceans majestic in aqua marine" have always been a source of comfort and delight.

[Jack...]

As you are to me my friend

[Blue Ivory]

"Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder."
Very romantic!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my sweet friend.

[Jack...]

Such a beautiful melody again in your words Jack, this is a song?
If not it could be~

"Roses a’ bloom in the gardens of spring
Pebbles awash on the shore
Bluebirds of summer, the songs that they sing
Valleys of green ever pure"

Your poetry is rich and full of seasonal daylight...
There is nothing dark to be found within your words.

- Elisa

[Jack...]

Thanks you so very much my sweet friend. I truly appreciate your kind words.

You're always welcome my friend :)

[AYVID N]

Eyes are the windows to the soul and a glance from the loved one the key to life. Very greatly said Jack. All the lines just flow and each verse has a beauty of it own. Thanks for sharing!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much for your sweet comments Divya

[AYVID N]

You are welcome Jack. Always a pleasure to read!

[Frieda P]

So gorgeous, this is definitely a breath of fresh air, it's like all of my favorite things plus love all rolled up in one delectable treat. Great uplifting poetry and just what the doctor ordered. Enchanting....

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Frieda. I hope it made you smile on this day.

[Emerald Seas]

Fabulous! Okay... since I don't ever write about my husband, I will share that this poem reminded me of how we met and the first glances we stole as we were both too bashful or nervous to approach each other the first time we "saw" each other. It took us, unknowingly, each traveling 10,000 miles and another chance meeting on a beach for us to actually meet. And... of course, yours truly had to be the one to snatch the opportunity! Dear God, I've known him for 28 years next month... crapmonkies what was I thinking ;) lol - all good!

[Jack...]

Well my friend, I have learned alot about you this day and I also learned a new word, "crapmonkies". I can truthfully say I have never heard that term before but I have now added it my list of fun new word to use. Thanks you always, you have a knack for making my day.

[Emerald Seas]

Oh, how do you not know the word "crapmonkies"? lol... a friend from an old writing group started the term ages ago - and although being around Marines I cuss just as well as the rest of them... I do try to keep some civility as a lady most of the time. :)

[Jack...]

I guess I have lived a sheltered life...

[Emerald Seas]

haha - I doubt that. It is a fun word! Hmm... from above - you learned a lot about me today. Jeez... tarnished the image already, have I??

[Jack...]

Nah, I'd say, polished it to a lustrous sheen.

[Emerald Seas]

Oh dear... the pressure! ;)

[Zahra]

amazing. Sometimes one glance can never be forgotten. Wonderful imagery as well.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much