Perfectly presenting my love

Sorry, I had to P

 

Perfectly Presenting my Love

by jack

 

 

Painting a picture of porcupines playing

Pincushions out in the field

Purple and pink for this playful perception

Plans of their purpose revealed

 

Painful endeavors of pacified pranksters

Presenting a pie at their place

Pecan or pumpkin, pickle, pineapple

Pieces are smeared on their face

 

Putting the paint on some powder puff paper

Pleasure in each stroke applied

Pausing to peer at the porcupines playing

Prancing in pansies they hide

 

Puzzling problems with pretzels and peanuts

Posturing people to prove

Pistachio perfume in prime presentation

Preaches that peaches will move

 

Polishing pastels on pre-printed pages

Prized the possessions we seek

Paisley the plumes of a peacocks posterior

Portraits now come take a peek

 

Pampering piccolos play the piano

Pure as a pelican’s prayer

Picking a parcel of plum flavored pudding

Poetic prose fills the air

 

Pleats in my pants shout in proud proclamation

Puddle my pores they perspire

Poodles on playgrounds prevent prosecution

Plotting my hearts pure desire

 

Passion precedes every past tense of parting

Piled high with presence so true

Pausing and pacing while purposely dreaming

Promising my love to you

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

Ok Jack you've created a poem with both alliteration and rhyming! What an undertaking and you do it with seemingly ease. This was just marvelous.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much

[Distant horizons]

This is brilliant Jack. The feel and flow of the words play like a nursery rhyme thats grown up and evolved into a rememberance of forgotten days.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[KeelyJane]

Pleasant, poignant, piquant, palatable, puissant, pragmatic, perfectly penned poetry! :)

[Jack...]

ppreciate it

[Baby Ricochet]

Pretty persuasive piece of poetry

[Jack...]

Thank so much

[Debra Wedin]

So cute...I love it!

[Jack...]

Thanks Debra, just having a little fun and testing my vocabulary

[Debra Wedin]

Well I liked it :-)
I'm no where near a professional writer,
It's nice to see refreshing new ways to write.
Thank you for sharing!

[Jack...]

Debra, I have read you poems, you are very good...don't kid yourself.

[Debra Wedin]

Wow..thank you so very much!!

[Marie]

THey should have been wearing pork-pie hats and serving plum pudding as well.

[Jack...]

Perhaps...thanks Marie