Perfectly presenting my love

Sorry, I had to P

 

Perfectly Presenting my Love

by jack

 

 

Painting a picture of porcupines playing

Pincushions out in the field

Purple and pink for this playful perception

Plans of their purpose revealed

 

Painful endeavors of pacified pranksters

Presenting a pie at their place

Pecan or pumpkin, pickle, pineapple

Pieces are smeared on their face

 

Putting the paint on some powder puff paper

Pleasure in each stroke applied

Pausing to peer at the porcupines playing

Prancing in pansies they hide

 

Puzzling problems with pretzels and peanuts

Posturing people to prove

Pistachio perfume in prime presentation

Preaches that peaches will move

 

Polishing pastels on pre-printed pages

Prized the possessions we seek

Paisley the plumes of a peacocks posterior

Portraits now come take a peek

 

Pampering piccolos play the piano

Pure as a pelican’s prayer

Picking a parcel of plum flavored pudding

Poetic prose fills the air

 

Pleats in my pants shout in proud proclamation

Puddle my pores they perspire

Poodles on playgrounds prevent prosecution

Plotting my hearts pure desire

 

Passion precedes every past tense of parting

Piled high with presence so true

Pausing and pacing while purposely dreaming

Promising my love to you

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Leigh]

A pageful of Ps that dominate the place, my lip are all out of Puh...this becomes a bit of a tongue twister after a while, this is a good fun write :-)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. Don't worry, just soak your lips in an adult beverage and the will straighten out soon.

[Leigh]

Yes lol, I am all out of beer tonight so just drinking tea!

[Jack...]

That'll work, it just takes more of it.

[Valentine]

What a broad use of words beginning with the letter P and it all makes sense..very nice one Jack..Kathie

[Jack...]

Thank you Kathie, just having a little fun.

[Just Kim]

deep powerful read, really liked alot

[Jack...]

Thanks, I was just having some fun.

[cherylhood]

Pleats in my pants shout in proud proclamation

Jack as always you make me laugh! I'll be back to read more my friend

[Jack...]

Hey there Cher. Thanks for this great surprise. I appreciate you logging in and reading some of my work.

[Jack...]

Ha, what a clever gorgous write my friend, so creative! so many P's in one Prescious Poem!!! a true inspiration for me to create one day a poem like this..., great work!

- Elisa

[Jack...]

I was just having a little fun with this one, just wanted to see if I could do it. Thank you so very much.

It's nice! just so creative! and funny!

[Holly Mason]

ha-ha
very loving p write truly
fun to read perfectly penned
thank you fine sir

[Jack...]

Thank you Holly and good morning. How did the show go?

[Holly Mason]

good morning-it is going to be 61 here today*)
show was absolutely amazing...and tiring*)thank you for asking

[Jack...]

Pictures?

[Holly Mason]

I pick up cd April 24th*)other then that we could not take any but the dang cd was $30...got to love a music/business director*) it has over 400 pictures there will be plenty*)

[Jack...]

And you will share some I hope?

[Holly Mason]

my pride won't let me not*)she is adorable truly a bushell and a peck and a hug around the neck a hug around the neck!although apparently she can shake her booty (well she doesn't know it yet but the boys did)they had to change a scene to block her tush with a table-another beautiful teenage girl will keep me hoppin*)

[Jack...]

Sounds like a major exercise program in your future. :)

[Veronica Chandler]

The timing could not have been more perfect for me to read and review this happy little tryst between "P's." First, as soon as I opened it, I happened upon the description where I discovered "Sorry I had to P", and so did I. Then, I came back to read the delightful slice of "P" heaven poured from your ever so imaginative pen. What a delight!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much. I am happy it moved you... :)

[Sami Khalil]

I like the lightness and fun aspect mixed with imagery and love all done in a masterful way. Another great job Jack...
I like : " pure as a Pelican's prayer.. and all...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Jack...Any time...:)

[Frieda P]

This is just Plain old fun to read, very clever, I don't know which line I like best, they were all Pretty damn Phenomenal!

'Paisley the plumes of a peacocks posterior'

Perfect!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Frieda. I am partial to your perfect presentation of praise.

[Frieda P]

Pleasantly pleasured my Prince.

[Carissa Marie]

I had fun reading this. This is amazing jack. :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much. It was fun to write