Yesterday dreams

Everyday dreams starts yesterday

 

Yesterday Dreams

by jack

 

Soft on the window

The curtain a’ flowing

Ripples of hope

Ever slow with the breeze

 

Movements of joy

As I pause for a moment

Pondering thoughts

Of my yesterday dreams

 

The carpet it calls me

In patterns of springtime

Twisting and turning

Of times often shared

 

Following visions of

Sweet life endeavors

Knowing the secrets

Of love fill the air

 

Silently waiting

My eyes find the wisdom

Locked up inside

Till the time it did come

 

So many years did my

Teardrops so glisten

Reflecting the scenes

Of a bright morning sun

 

Fancy the smile

That does harness emotions

Calm is the breath

That does sing a sweet song

 

Mind over matter

Of thought out diversions

Lost were my dreams

Until you came along

 

Yesterday waits

For the new day a’ starting

Finding the truth

Does not stand far away

 

Reasons before

Do not matter that often

Only decisions

Arisen this day

 

Here comes the sun

As a new day is dawning

Opened so wide

Now my eyes view the scene

 

Dreams of the past

Do now come everlasting

For you are the girl

Of my yesterday dreams

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Jack...]

Yesterday Dreams, just the title, gives me already many ways to think, beautifully selected, then your poem, rises from soft surreal touch into words... When reading you it's always a enchanting mind travel, and a heartsmile you share to your readers...so love that! Thank you Jack! :)

- Elisa

[Jack...]

Elisa dear, if I have managed to make your heart smile, then I have accomplished my goal. Thank you so very much.

:) such a pleasure to read your work !

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Such beautiful imagery in this one. I'm so drawn to these words and phrases. You have a gift, my friend. "As a new day is dawning/Opened so wide/Now my eyes view the scene"--well done.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much sweet poet. You are an inspiration to me, so your words are of those I cherish.

[Monster ^.^]

When dreams do come true, we tend to reminisce the time when we made them.. and oh how happy we had become. Very lovely poem.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much friend.

[Veronica Chandler]

Thank You...for writing this little piece of heaven in a poem. The feeling I have when reading this piece is like manna straight from the gods. I am inexplicably drawn into this moment, frozen in time, ripe with possibilities and the hopes of days gone by. An absolute jewel from your pen Jack!

[Jack...]

Veronica, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. This is truly wonderful coming from a poet I admire as I do you. Thank you so much.

[Veronica Chandler]

My pleasure and delight.

[KAOlmsted]

I want to take a vacation in your brain...it is, without question, the most calming, languid, tranquil, relaxing place on earth (did I use enough adjectives that essentially mean the same thing there?) ;-) This is truly lovely.

[Jack...]

Be my guest, there are a lot of vacancies in my brain. Thanks so much Kimmer.

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! I somehow doubt that, Jack...I think that inn is essentially always to full capacity :-D Always my pleasure...

[quinfinn]

i have seen the new face of romance poetry, and it is jack. this is wonderfully descriptive and utterly gorgeous. read this on open mic tonite and you'll get some leg for sure! i am duly impressed, sir!

[Jack...]

Actually I read a different one on open mic, it didn't help either. Thanks so much my friend.

[icelandicblue]

Dreams can come true if we hold onto hope. Dreams are the things that glow in our peripheral vision until they are unveiled and shed their bright light on love realized. It is a truly lovely poem and a pleasure to read.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my dear friend. I always appreciate your kind words.

[Ruth]

Beautiful!
The essence of respect dealt and felt :) Lovely piece, smiling xox

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your kind words.

[Ruth]

Most welcome!

[Becky C Strukamp]

A very tender loving caring write. Our daydreams of yesteryears give us perspective into the futures of the yet unknown delivering us a chance to get lost in the "what could be" of our future. I believe that it is our day dreams that carry us forward.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much and so right you are. Thank you again for visiting my work. I am honored to have you here.

[Sami Khalil]

"Following visions of

Sweet life endeavors

Knowing the secrets

Of love fill the air



Silently waiting

My eyes find the wisdom

Locked up inside

Till the time it did come."
First I love the title and then the amazing flow of thoughts and ideas written with a magical pen.
Those are my favorite lines but all is good...Pen on to tomorrow's destiny...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much friend

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)