Absolutely gorgeous. Your words bring a sense of peace and contentment, a oneness with both the springtime and a beloved. A beautiful piece - thank you for sharing!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so very much for your kind words. I see you are from Philly? I grew up across the bridge i.. read moreThank you so very much for your kind words. I see you are from Philly? I grew up across the bridge in Glassboro N.J. I live in Texas now.
Sweet, calm, and full of a deep emotion without being overdone. Love these two stanzas:
Movements of joy
As I pause for a moment
Pondering thoughts
Of my yesterday dreams
...
Reasons before
Do not matter that often
Only decisions
Arisen this day
You have a soul of a true romantic, and you write of it with ease, my friend. Thoroughly enjoyed, thank you for sharing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much my friend. It is always your comments that create this smile that I now wear.
11 Years Ago
Glad to hear that! ;)
Hope you continue to have a lovely day.
I agree. Everyday dreams start yesterday. If not today, maybe tomorrow you can see the sun...
Another great work from you, Jack. Thanks for sharing this one.
A lighthearted, delightful read, it brought sun into my day. I also love the pic, I've always wanted to take a balloon ride, but my fear of heights always stopped me. This makes me want to float away in your joyous words. Perfect pick me up for a Monday morning Jack...as usual, you've done it again!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much Frieda, I too am afraid of heights but still managed to go up in one, it was amazing... read moreThanks so much Frieda, I too am afraid of heights but still managed to go up in one, it was amazing.
I'd love to do it one day, so odd as a kid I used to climb this huge tree in my backyard and hide up.. read moreI'd love to do it one day, so odd as a kid I used to climb this huge tree in my backyard and hide up there, now I can't even think of it without getting the heebie jeebies. My pleasure always.
11 Years Ago
Well if you see one hovering overhead, it just may be me, so wave (or flip it off) whatever mood you.. read moreWell if you see one hovering overhead, it just may be me, so wave (or flip it off) whatever mood you happen to be in at the time. :)>
I'm filled with joy reading this! It makes me deliriously happy to know that hope flourishes in dreams and "secrets of love fill the air". It doesn't get much better than that! Beautiful!
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..