Perfect Bird's Eye View

Perfect Bird's Eye View

A Poem by Jack...
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Things seem so much clearer now.

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Perfect Bird’s Eye View

by jack

 

The pathway long and winding

Of obstacles I’m finding

So easily I seem to overcome

 

Steep and never ending

The height I am ascending

It seems that I can almost touch the sun

 

Still I keep on going

Beneath a sky that’s glowing

Till everything beneath me I can see

 

A few more steps I travel

Soon the sights unravel

When I am at the place I long to be

 

As to the edge I’m nearing

And down below I’m peering

I find that all my dreams have now come true

 

For as I stand here gazing

The world it is amazing

Offered by this perfect bird’s eye view

 

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
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You write of that heightened awareness that comes from true enlightenment. I found it to be a wonderful ride across the sky. Oh to have a bird's eye view!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much.
Beautifully done. This reminds me a little of the Icarus myth...flying on borrowed wings, enjoying the sights and feeling so much that you must be careful not to fly too close to the sun. I love the imagery in this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much. I appreciate your kind words.
This is so lovely, and so light. Nicely written

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much
Sounds like Nirvana...we should all be so lucky. This is eloquently written and sails off the page like a bird in flight. Simply lovely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Frieda. Your kind words are welcomed early this morning
well , by all appearances you have reached the pinnacle of well being and enlightenment. indeed, a reflection of the satisfaction of achievement and fruition of life's lofty goals. this write speaks eloquently and quite nicely of all the venues of success finally coming together after a somewhat arduous journey. masterfully penned, jack!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Quinn.
this is refreshing being up looking down
wish we had wings...they can take you anywhere you want to be
the world is amazing isn't it...even now when i am actually getting flurries again like this is Alaska or something but it is still amazingly beautiful
like the art work you have used with this very much
thank you for sharing fine sir

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you for commenting my friend. 85 and sunny here today...just saying.
Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

bonehead I really am kind of over this chilly weather but it was nice this past weekend ...yeah righ.. read more
What a beautiful poem of accomplishment. This poem makes me want to reach for the stars. Thank you for this poem. Great format as well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Justin. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
A beautiful soaring poem...to see the world from on high...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Marie

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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