Alphabet Soup

Even the alphabet says I love you if you know where to start

 

 

 

 

Alphabet Soup

By jack

 

 

Around the world I search for you

Before the sun does rise

Creating such a wondrous view

Debuting for my eyes

 

Each moment that I come to share

Facing towards the east

Grabbing hold of everything

However I may see

 

Insisting that you take my hand

Joining in the song

Knowing you will understand

Listening all along

 

Many times I want to cry

Nothing seems to ease

Others tend to wander by

Pretending to appease

 

Quietly I search for you

Reaching for a star

Stating but my point of view

Taking it too far

 

Understand the way I feel

Verify the lot

When will all of this be real

X does mark the spot

 

You alone do take my heart

Zero hour they say

In this poem you will find

I love you starts with A

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[eglantine]

aw cute! I could easily see this being a children's book.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Eglantine. I appreciate you reading my poem.

[Junert]

I love it, nice.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much

[Cara]

OMG!!! amazing write,

In this poem you will find

I love you starts with A
amazing, thank you for sharing

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much

[Mehak Mushtaq]

It's an amazing one.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[Kenilo Kent]

To be honest this write up Lacks a high degree of seriousness. Still a stretch of imagination.

[Jack...]

Thanks

[Holly Mason]

a soothing dedication to the most beautiful thing...our alphabet
the lines represent each letter wonderfully...are you practicing they teach them the alphabet at 6 months old now*)
thank you so much for sharing-I love you starts with A

[Jack...]

Thanks Holly. I always appreciate your kind words.

[quinfinn]

i was wondering how you were gonna deal with "x" and "z' and you did not disappoint. this is really terrific! you are truly a word master, jack. nicely done! bet you're awesome at scrabble....and romance

[Jack...]

Thank Quinn, how many points is romance?

[quinfinn]

not nearly enough, believe me! even with a triple word score you can't beat "ox" or "brazen"

[Jack...]

But it is a 7 letter word, so dont forget to figure that in.

[Carolann Dowsett]

So much love in this it really touches my heart.

[Jack...]

Thank you Carolann, that is the best review I could have received.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome Jack :)

[icelandicblue]

Very clever and pretty impressive. I wondered what you were going to do with x and z. This was a great read.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my fun little piece

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I usually don't like these things, but I have to say you really made this work Jack!

It's pretty well touching.

[Jack...]

Thanks Michael, I was just having some fun and wanted to see if I could do it. I am pleased you liked it.