Forever mine

Eternally, I will love thee

 

Forever Mine

By jack

 

Innocence, O’ heart of mine

I send to thee a tender kiss

Found within these words a’ rhyme

Flowing from my fingertips

 

Written soft, affection’s flare

O’ to touch your precious heart

O’er these words of love I share

Prayers that we shall never part

 

Bring thy smile to my gaze

Fill my life with joy divine

Within these words of love I pray

Your love shall be forever mine

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

A beautiful rhyming piece as a tribute to love. You makes everyone believe it is out there waiting to be discovered.

[Jack...]

It is Anne, it is. Thank you does not seem good enough anymore, you have graced me with your affectionate words this day so that I do not have to look outside of this site to find my heart singing.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most prefect and telling piece.

[Jack...]

Thanks Thomas...always.

[Kristin Lee]

Oh Jack...this one is simply wonderful. You know how hard edged I can be too. And this one is just...beautiful.

[Jack...]

Thanks Kristin. Hopefully to soften out a few of those edges, though they don't really seem that hard to me.

[annabellee]

aw that is such a sweet poem, it really touched me.
Excellent writing :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. I am happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for visiting.

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[TL Boehm]

love the picture, and the font and the tone of this piece - old world and romantic. Well done

[Jack...]

Thanks Tammy

[Astro]

Bright and flowery this one was, even if the muse has passed. Just know for every thought that inspires words from you is her image presenting itself to you alone.

[Jack...]

Thanks Astro, I could hardly forget...

[Angel]

There seems to be a never ending fountain of love songs in your heart, my friend.
This one has me sighing...as you knew it would...
Keep 'em coming, Jack, my Sweet Talking friend...you keep my old lady's heart young!

[Jack...]

If you keep reading, I will keep writing. Thank you so much Angel. I am overjoyed you find happiness in my poems.

[Zahra]

Written soft, affection’s flare
O’ to touch your precious heart
O’er these words of love I share
Prayers that we shall never part

simply beautiful, soft and profound. Lovely

[Jack...]

Thanks you so very much Zahra for your kind words.

[Zahra]

You're welcome! :)

[carol burgess romance]

As always well done my friend

[Jack...]

As always, thank you my friend.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yet another gentle poem of love in flowing metered verse.

[Jack...]

Thanks John