Which castles trace

Love is always a fairytale

 

Which castles trace

by jack

 

Castles stand, O’ precious flow of filtered dreams and star shine glow

Upon a hill, in distant flight, beckoning this winter’s night

O’ winding road with pebbles cast and gardens rich of every past

Lay wishes made, on ripples clear of crystalline and words to hear

 

Tree top winds to serenade before the branches bent and swayed

O’er forest deep and climbing fears when rain drops fall of mounting tears

O’ breathe of this and many so, to stand of breeze fed gentle flow

With scent of jasmine on the air and rose bud petals in your hair

 

Lay colors rich and vibrant sweet, a soft caress upon your feet

In silken sheen and opal blend, o’er shaded mist around the bend

For this I bring to only you, my angel sweet and love so true

O’ every dream your heart desires and passions deep of dancing fires

 

My love, beneath this painted sky, with sparrow’s nest and captured eye

Cascades a truth of rapids pure, for this my one that I adore

So climb, I pray, upon my steed, of quickened pace and steady speed

As I will lead you to this place, of perfect love which castles trace

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Great story progression, classic,brilliant, vivid and captivating piece. Can't ask for more. :) another great write of Mr. Jack :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much sir.

[Melissa Sofia]

Amazing, it takes me away on a beautiful journey, loves it!

[Jack...]

Thank you for reading

[Zahra]

lovely. :) wonderful imagery

[Jack...]

Thank you very much

[KAOlmsted]

O' !!!!!!!

I came, I read, I screamed O' !!!!!!! ;-)

Then I gave you 100/100...

[Jack...]

Thank you sO' much my dear friend

[KAOlmsted]

;-) Always...

[InsanityWriter]

Perfectly lovely. ^_^ I loved it!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much

[Carolann Dowsett]

Wow Jack divinely beautiful, took me to a gentler world where true love exists.

[Jack...]

Welcome to my castle, M'lady. Thank you so much.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Kenilo Kent]

Lovely.

[Jack...]

Thanks

[Kho-San]

After the first stanza, I realised that this poem flows too well for one that doesn't rhyme, so I had to start again and see why that was. It was then that I spotted the rhymes, and began to appreciate the source of the rhythm and flow much more.
The content is as beautiful as the structure and rhythm, and it makes one hope that maybe one day that fairy tale love can come to be, or as close as possible to it we can get

[Jack...]

Thank you so much for your kind words and creating a bright spot in my day.

[KeelyJane]

Beautiful imagery. Beautiful word flow. Beautiful poetry.

[Jack...]

thank you for your beautiful comments.

[Salar Majak]

Beautiful, honest, heart sweeping poem, amazing!
the pure imagery in this one glitters in front of the reader to enjoy!
beautiful!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Aurora