Fleur magnifique O 'de mon jardin

Three poems, same words, different languages

 

 

 

 

 

Fleur magnifique O 'de mon jardin

par jack

Fleur magnifique O 'de mon jardin
Doux pétales un "écoulement dans mes yeux
Une brise douce parfumée de l'amour éternel
Lumineux comme le ciel bleu de printemps

Aimez-moi comme jamais entrera nos lendemains
Live pour aujourd'hui au sein de mon étreinte douce
C"ur de mon c"ur peut vous ne vous sentez la douleur
Tristesse un sentiment que je longs à effacer

Rêves d'amour qui coule toujours dans le printemps
Sous l'ombre de l'arbre de chêne grandiose
Lazy le domaine dont nous disposons sur son confort
Wondrous le jour où votre amour vient à moi

Bague de mélodies dans le plus silencieux des moments
Sweet Harmony vient le bruit de notre amour
Chante-moi doucement la voix d'un ange
Envoyé pour m'aimer du haut du ciel

 

Fiore magnifico O 'del mio giardino

da jack

Fiore magnifico O 'del mio giardino
Flusso dolce petalo una 'nei miei occhi
Una brezza dolcemente profumata di amore eterno
Luminoso come il cielo azzurro di primavera

Amami come non mai verrà il nostro domani
Vivere per l'oggi nel mio morbido abbraccio
Cuore del mio cuore non pu™ sentire dolore
Una sensazione di tristezza ho tempo per cancellare

Sogni d'amore che scorre sempre in primavera
All'ombra dell'albero più grande quercia
Pigro campo che poniamo la sua comodità
Meraviglioso il giorno che il vostro amore viene a me

Anello melodie in momenti più tranquilli
Dolce armonia arriva il suono del nostro amore
Cantare per me dolcemente la voce di un angelo
Fatto scendere su di me l'amore dal cielo sopra

 

 

 

O' magnificent flower of my garden

By jack

 

O' magnificent flower of my garden

Sweet petal a' flow in my eyes

A breeze softly fragrant of love everlasting

Bright as the blue springtime skies

 

Love me as never shall come our tomorrows

Live for today within my soft embrace

Heart of my heart may you never feel sorrow

Sadness a feeling I long to erase

 

Dreams ever flowing of love in the springtime

Under the shade of the grandest oak tree

Lazy the field which we lay of its comfort

Wondrous the day that your love comes to me

 

Melodies ring in the quietest moments

Sweet harmony comes the sound of our love

Sing to me softly the voice of an angel

Sent down to love me from heaven above

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[eglantine]

There is something about the french language--it even looks aesthetically more pleasing on the page than English, at least to me. Did you actually write it in French? Or did you use a translator after writing it in English?

[Jack...]

I have to admit I used a translator, but once translated to both French and Italian, I printed out the translation and re-typed it to the page so that I could feel the texture and form of each word.

[Kho-San]

Firstly, this is a beautiful poem, as always, your description is vivid and your literary style is amazing. Secondly, I am amazed by the fact that you could write the same poem in three different languages, I tried reading the first one with my broken French, and though I didn't succeed in reading it all due to my understanding falling apart, the French language does give it a certain flare, especially reading out loud to myself in as much of a French accent as I could manage. I'm guessing the second one is Spanish, I've never studied Spanish so it is just a bunch of semi-understandable words to me. The French version seems to have some English in it, am not sure if you did it on purpose, but I thought I should point it out just in case.
On the whole, beautiful (both for the content and for the creativity of having it in other languages)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Kho-San. The other language is Italian. As far as the English words in the french version, in some cases french does not have a word that translates to English for what I was saying and in other cases we share the same word.

[Kho-San]

Just call me Kho, Kho-San sounds so formal.
Oh, Italien! I should have known! What other language has words like "magnifico!" or "eterno!"
I might get my Italien friend to read it out in Italien for me, it would be nice to hear it. Thanks for letting me know ;D

[quinfinn]

well, i don't parlez vous Francais very well , so i was happy for the translation. this poem is c'est magnifique! well written, my friend.....very touching and lovely.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much...merci beaucoup...grazie mille

[quinfinn]

loved it!

[Marie]

All three poems are lovely...I wish I had such a cgarden...

[Jack...]

Thanks Marie, trying to add a little international flair to my poetry.