Fleur magnifique O 'de mon jardin

Three poems, same words, different languages

 

 

 

 

 

Fleur magnifique O 'de mon jardin

par jack

Fleur magnifique O 'de mon jardin
Doux pétales un "écoulement dans mes yeux
Une brise douce parfumée de l'amour éternel
Lumineux comme le ciel bleu de printemps

Aimez-moi comme jamais entrera nos lendemains
Live pour aujourd'hui au sein de mon étreinte douce
C"ur de mon c"ur peut vous ne vous sentez la douleur
Tristesse un sentiment que je longs à effacer

Rêves d'amour qui coule toujours dans le printemps
Sous l'ombre de l'arbre de chêne grandiose
Lazy le domaine dont nous disposons sur son confort
Wondrous le jour où votre amour vient à moi

Bague de mélodies dans le plus silencieux des moments
Sweet Harmony vient le bruit de notre amour
Chante-moi doucement la voix d'un ange
Envoyé pour m'aimer du haut du ciel

 

Fiore magnifico O 'del mio giardino

da jack

Fiore magnifico O 'del mio giardino
Flusso dolce petalo una 'nei miei occhi
Una brezza dolcemente profumata di amore eterno
Luminoso come il cielo azzurro di primavera

Amami come non mai verrà il nostro domani
Vivere per l'oggi nel mio morbido abbraccio
Cuore del mio cuore non pu™ sentire dolore
Una sensazione di tristezza ho tempo per cancellare

Sogni d'amore che scorre sempre in primavera
All'ombra dell'albero più grande quercia
Pigro campo che poniamo la sua comodità
Meraviglioso il giorno che il vostro amore viene a me

Anello melodie in momenti più tranquilli
Dolce armonia arriva il suono del nostro amore
Cantare per me dolcemente la voce di un angelo
Fatto scendere su di me l'amore dal cielo sopra

 

 

 

O' magnificent flower of my garden

By jack

 

O' magnificent flower of my garden

Sweet petal a' flow in my eyes

A breeze softly fragrant of love everlasting

Bright as the blue springtime skies

 

Love me as never shall come our tomorrows

Live for today within my soft embrace

Heart of my heart may you never feel sorrow

Sadness a feeling I long to erase

 

Dreams ever flowing of love in the springtime

Under the shade of the grandest oak tree

Lazy the field which we lay of its comfort

Wondrous the day that your love comes to me

 

Melodies ring in the quietest moments

Sweet harmony comes the sound of our love

Sing to me softly the voice of an angel

Sent down to love me from heaven above

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Angel]

Now, who would have thought our Romantic Jack was also a scholar of languages?
Love in French, Italian, and English, no?
And a beautiful bit of writing, in any language.
I am seriously impressed...Thou speaketh in toungues!!

Nice write, my friend!!
Leaving us gals panting for more!!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my good friend, hey you never know with me, I'm liable to try anything to get the ladies swooning. I wish I could write in chocolate. :)

[Angel]

ROFLOL
You'd never get a moment's peace, my friend. You know how us gals love our chocolate!!

[carol burgess romance]

Beautiful....such a great write

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Carol

[s y e]

I know for a fact you'll have FP swooning here! :P You know how she loves her French, Ahahaha.

Jack, this was absolutely fantastic!!! You had me swooning! Ha, I adore languages,and have learned alot but this blew me away, it's absolutely stunning.

~ Noodle

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my good friend.

[Dhaye]

Wow! You impressed me more, Jack. Three languages...

I love these lines:
"Cantare per me dolcemente la voce di un angelo
Fatto scendere su di me l'amore dal cielo sopra"

Haha. I learned something again.

[Jack...]

Thanks for the kind words Dhaye.

[Kristin Lee]

"sadness a feeling I long to erase." Very powerful words my friend. So fitting that I happened to be listening to Every Rose Has its Thorn when I read this. I really liked how you had this in 3 languages. It really drives home the face that feelings are universal. Beautiful poem with beautiful sentiments.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Kristin. Happy you enjoyed it.

[Emerald Seas]

If you tell me you can speak all three languages, I can been officially tagged as swooning! haha ;)
Beautiful, Jack. How did I miss this poem? Ah, the date... I don't think I was following your writing that early in the year. Well, this is just - simply fabulous.

"Love me as never shall come our tomorrows
Live for today within my soft embrace"

Takes me to a time back when... potential and love danced a brief waltz in the wind... you gotta stop writing this stuff that brings me back to all that, Jack! ;) I think I get the lid squished down where it will almost close and then it keeps bursting open spreading out to wreak havoc all over again. Just a friendly jab. It's my own issue. Gotta stop reading through the vault though - that's not helping either! :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sera. Your visits always thrill me. Please don't read the vault stuff, just post them so I can read them. I won't tell you what they say.

Friendly jabs from you are a gift to me.

[Emerald Seas]

haha... "Please don't read the vault stuff, just post them so I can read them." Now, THAT is hilarious.

[Jack...]

Hey, I am in a humorous mood I guess.

[Emerald Seas]

Well pass me some of that, because my head has been wrapped in the past tonight with the vault!

[Jack...]

Stay away from the vault. Think of the Magnolia Pancake House. Mmmmm Stay away from the vault.

[Emerald Seas]

Yep there's a reason I've stayed away from those works. My son made brownies - maybe I should wander over to the kitchen ... or there is always the liquor cabinet! I think I'm letting these topics rest for tonight. Have a good weekend, Jack.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A testament to your ability to write and guide your readers, well done, good read.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

This is magnificent Jack in all four language and the fourth is of course love...Bravo...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Frieda P]

Oh now you've done it, you have my heart in a neat little bow all tied up fancy in French & Italian, the way straight to a woman's heart!

'A breeze softly fragrant of love everlasting
Bright as the blue springtime skies'

This feels like softly fragrant breeze...just lovely, as always Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much dear Frieda. Merci Beaucoup...Grazie Mille

[Frieda P]

Now you're just trying to get me to pass out ;-)