Fleur magnifique O 'de mon jardin

Three poems, same words, different languages

 

 

 

 

 

Fleur magnifique O 'de mon jardin

par jack

Fleur magnifique O 'de mon jardin
Doux pétales un "écoulement dans mes yeux
Une brise douce parfumée de l'amour éternel
Lumineux comme le ciel bleu de printemps

Aimez-moi comme jamais entrera nos lendemains
Live pour aujourd'hui au sein de mon étreinte douce
C"ur de mon c"ur peut vous ne vous sentez la douleur
Tristesse un sentiment que je longs à effacer

Rêves d'amour qui coule toujours dans le printemps
Sous l'ombre de l'arbre de chêne grandiose
Lazy le domaine dont nous disposons sur son confort
Wondrous le jour où votre amour vient à moi

Bague de mélodies dans le plus silencieux des moments
Sweet Harmony vient le bruit de notre amour
Chante-moi doucement la voix d'un ange
Envoyé pour m'aimer du haut du ciel

 

Fiore magnifico O 'del mio giardino

da jack

Fiore magnifico O 'del mio giardino
Flusso dolce petalo una 'nei miei occhi
Una brezza dolcemente profumata di amore eterno
Luminoso come il cielo azzurro di primavera

Amami come non mai verrà il nostro domani
Vivere per l'oggi nel mio morbido abbraccio
Cuore del mio cuore non pu™ sentire dolore
Una sensazione di tristezza ho tempo per cancellare

Sogni d'amore che scorre sempre in primavera
All'ombra dell'albero più grande quercia
Pigro campo che poniamo la sua comodità
Meraviglioso il giorno che il vostro amore viene a me

Anello melodie in momenti più tranquilli
Dolce armonia arriva il suono del nostro amore
Cantare per me dolcemente la voce di un angelo
Fatto scendere su di me l'amore dal cielo sopra

 

 

 

O' magnificent flower of my garden

By jack

 

O' magnificent flower of my garden

Sweet petal a' flow in my eyes

A breeze softly fragrant of love everlasting

Bright as the blue springtime skies

 

Love me as never shall come our tomorrows

Live for today within my soft embrace

Heart of my heart may you never feel sorrow

Sadness a feeling I long to erase

 

Dreams ever flowing of love in the springtime

Under the shade of the grandest oak tree

Lazy the field which we lay of its comfort

Wondrous the day that your love comes to me

 

Melodies ring in the quietest moments

Sweet harmony comes the sound of our love

Sing to me softly the voice of an angel

Sent down to love me from heaven above

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Absolutely beautiful Jack. :) You've created yet another masterpiece.

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is beautiful, Jack.. I wish I could read it in the other languages. So passionate and soothing all at once.

[Jack...]

Thank you Lori. Just having a little romantic fun.

[Blue Ivory]

This is amazing work! You are a true talent.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Zahra]

How smoothing this poem is, soft and beautiful, really wonderful. Loved this. I love different languages.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Zahra, my sweet friend.

[LadySoDivine]

Oh, this is different! I really like it! :) I actually speak both French and Italian (and English, considering it's not my native tongue). This gave me quite a practice to see if I'm still good at both languages even though I haven't spoken either in a while. Luckily, I'm still good.
Anyway, the poem itself is very beautiful as always. So much emotion and written so beautifully. Really touched my heart. Wonderful as always, Jack!

[Jack...]

Merci mon ami.

[LadySoDivine]

Il n'y a pas de quoi! :)

[Astro]

Firstly, I want to commend you for undertaking and publishing a piece this difficult. I say this because being bilingual and knowing a touch of a few other languages on top of that how, even I, would have a hard time doing something like this. The translations into French were a bit off, but didn't suffer too much in getting the overall mood of the piece. It is a very touching poem though with loving sentiment and beautiful imagery. I can't say much for the Italian I'm afraid. I can follow it pretty good, but don't speak it although, I do know how to say, "Bravo!"

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Astro]

You're very welcome.

[TL Boehm]

three times as beautiful. I don't speak Italian but I did take a few years of Latin so I so appreciated the "sound" of the poem
Melodies ring in the quietest moments. That was lovely

[Jack...]

Thank you Tammy. Just having a little fun here

[Baby Ricochet]

I do believe I'm blushing

[Jack...]

Oh come on now? Thanks my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

Well, THAT got my brain working this morning! Took 4 years of Italian (after hearing my grandparents argue in the language for years), so I read the Italian first - got much of it right :) Of course, the English version is the one I prefer, because I can see and hear your beautiful images with ease. Very nice, and a creative way to play with language! Molto bene!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate you stopping by.

[icelandicblue]

It's beautiful in all languages.
Je recommande que tu traduisez en français "Sweet Harmony" à l'harmonie douce ou peut-être sucre?
Un beau poème, ton stylo est magique!

[Jack...]

And so are you my friend, so are you. Merci, mon ami.