Slumber Blooms at Night

A fresh scent, a beautiful love

 

 

Slumber Blooms at Night

by jack 

 

O’ Fragrance of Magnolia

Magnificent a sight

Lying on your bed stand

Slumber Blooms at night

Aromas fill the room

Fresh scent fills the air

Sweet bouquet Magnolia

Throughout your golden hair

Beauty prompted scents

As fine as any made

Filtered by the smile you wear

Resting in the shade

I gently kneel beside you

Observing you at rest

Knowing true my love for you

Will more than stand the test

Your hand I hold so tender

Each finger within mine

Caressing softly, lovingly

Losing track of time

This vision you my angel

The love I’ve waited for

I’ll stay till you awaken

And love even more

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Monster ^.^]

Sweet and calm, sweet and calm. To write with an image in mind is usually hard for some to explicitly show emotions, but you just aced that :D

[Jack...]

Thanks Monster, I appreciate it.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

"Classic and eternal" still your work beautifuly penned and creatively rich. I enjoy it. Keep writing!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[KAREN]

This is breathtaking. The poetic beauty of this is that the reader can smell the magnolia through your words, they can vision all of its beauty!

[Jack...]

Thank you...I love the fragrance of the magnolia.

[KAREN]

Me too! And you're welcome!

[Marie]

I love the smell of magnolia...the blooms are beautiful...I like the analogy to human lovliness...
In the fifth line "Aroma's" does not need to be possessive.

[Jack...]

Thank you Marie